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WRITING FOR A REAL WORLD Writing for a Real World 2009 - 2010 A multidisciplinary anthology by USF students PUBLISHED BY THE UNIVERSITY OF SAN FRANCISCO DEPARTMENT OF RHETORIC AND LANGUAGE 2 www.usfca.edu/wrw Writing for a Real World (WRW) is published annually by the Department of Rhetoric and Language, College of Arts and Sciences, University of San Francisco. WRW is governed by the Rhetoric and Language Publication Committee, chaired by Devon C. Holmes and David Holler. Members are: Brian Komei Dempster, Michelle LaVigne, Michael Rozendal, and David Ryan. Writing for a Real World: 8th edition © 2010 The opinions stated herein are those of the authors. Authors retain copyright for their individual work. Essays include bibliographical references. The format and practice of documenting sources are determined by each writer. Writers are responsible for validating and citing their research. Cover image courtesy of Rich Cleland. This photograph was taken in Stone Town, Zanzibar in Tanzania. Printer: DeHarts Printing, San Jose, Calif. PRINTED IN THE UNITED STATES OF AMERICA. To get involved as a referee, serve on the publication committee, obtain back print issues, or to learn about submitting to WRW, please contact David Holler <email@example.com>. Back issues are now available online via Gleeson Library’s Digital Collections. For all other inquiries: Writing for a Real World, University of San Francisco, Kalmanovitz Hall, Rm. 202, 2130 Fulton Street, San Francisco, CA, 94117. Fair Use Statement: Writing for a Real World is an educational journal whose mission is to showcase the best undergraduate writing at the University of San Francisco. Student work often contextualizes and recontextualizes the work of others within the scope of course-related assignments. WRW presents these articles with the specifi c objective of advancing an understanding of academic knowledge, scholarship, and research. We believe that this context constitutes a “fair use” of copyrighted material as provided for in section 107 of the U.S. Copyright Law. In accordance with Title 17 U.S.C. Section 107, the material herein is made available by WRW without profi t to those students and faculty who are interested in receiving this information for research, scholarship, and educational purposes. 3 Writing for a Real World 2009 - 2010 Editor David Ryan Managing Editor and Cover Designer David Holler Associate Editors Brian Komei Dempster Devon Christina Holmes Darrell g.h. Schramm Publication Assistants Estephanie Bautista Sunga Laura Waldron Program Assistant Tara Donohoe Journal Referees Karen Bouwer, Modern and Classical Languages Brian Komei Dempster, Rhetoric and Language Leslie Dennen, Rhetoric and Language Brenda Frye, Physics and Astronomy Joe Garity, Gleeson Library Johnnie Johnson Hafernik, ESL, Rhetoric and Language David Holler, Rhetoric and Language Devon C. Holmes, Rhetoric and Language Leslie King, Biology Todd Lewis, Rhetoric and Language Michelle LaVigne, Rhetoric and Language Theodore Matula, Rhetoric and Language Mark Meritt, Rhetoric and Language Michael Rozendal, Rhetoric and Language Stephanie Vandrick, ESL, Rhetoric and Language Fredel Wiant, Rhetoric and Language WRITING FOR A REAL WORLD 4 Reading and Writing in the Disciplines 6 Dedication to Darrell g.h. Schramm 9 Honorable Mentions 10 The Petrine Confession as the Origin of Christology: A Structural and Theological Re-examination of Matthew 16: 13-20 JOEY BELLEZA 12 The Right to Discriminate: An Analysis of Christian Legal Society v. Martinez MADISON RUSSELL 33 Confl ict and Compromise: The Constitutionality of Slavery BRENNA MCCALLICK 45 The Story of Cormac mac Airt KELSEY RANSICK 56 Projecting Institutionalized Racism HANNAH HEYER 73 Prevalence and Barriers to Treatment and Social Impact of Untreated Diabetes Mellitus in Guatemala RICHARD P. HACKETT 90 Aging Alice JULIA PENDER 101 Not All Who Wonder Are Lost KYLE O’BRIEN 110 Table of Contents WRITING FOR A REAL WORLD 5 Remittances: A Refl ection of and an Impetus for Shifting Somali Gender Relations HEATHER M. FOX 119 The Decision to End It All NELENE DEGUZMAN 133 2010-2011 Submissions Information 144 WRITING FOR A REAL WORLD 6 Reading and Writing in the Disciplines STUDENT WRITING is often composed in uncertainty. Though students understand their teachers are an exclusive audience, they also know that this audience is demanding, and, often, unpre-dictable when assessing their work. Writing occurs in the curricular work of our university to help students develop their rhetorical knowledge and their research skills. For this reason, most academic writing serves academic interests. However, considerable eff ort is put into writing about public issues, workplace matters, technical and business interests, and service-learning. In these varying contexts, students use writ-ing to process their learning as well as resolve problems. In these ever broadening spheres, students are asked to creatively and sen-sitively adapt their composing choices and research methods to situations in which even greater uncertainty exists. These shifting variables are often met with other epistemo-logical challenges when teachers give their students the freedom to choose the focus of their assignments. For some students, this latitude is a paralyzing excess, but, for resourceful writers, this freedom allows them to employ their imagination, interpretation, ethics, and reasoning to better meet the challenges of writing in more uncertain or ill-defi ned spheres of learning. For our eighth edition, our student writers use their consider-able skill and rhetorical knowledge to compose their work from six diff erent disciplines. From English, history, nursing, politics, theology and religious studies, and rhetoric, our authors use writ-ing to address a variety of subjects, including the historiography of Cormac mac Airt, the literature of Charles Dodgson (Lewis Carroll), the debate regarding the constitutionality of slavery, institutionalized racism, First Amendment rights, Golden Gate Bridge suicide barriers, and regional and global health issues. We hope our readers enjoy these essays, for our mature writers enter uncomfortable spheres of uncertainty as a way to create certain knowledge. WRITING FOR A REAL WORLD 7 Notes No one knows for certain just how many papers were written last year at USF. Although an untold number of papers were composed, students submitted 126 entries for this issue, and every entry was reviewed carefully by at least two readers, and every winning sub-mission had to pass the review of at least four referees. In our an-thology, we present 10 exemplary papers in manuscript form writ-ten from the 2009–2010 academic year. We thank our new as well as experienced judges for reviewing the submissions with great care and patience. Our judges are listed on page three. Fr. Urban Grassi, S.J. Award In this issue, the Department of Rhetoric and Language announces its fourth annual Fr. Urban Grassi, S.J. Award for Eloquentia Perfecta, an award named after USF’s fi rst professor of English and Elocu-tion. This award is given to the highest recommended entry. This year’s winner is Joey Belleza for his essay, “The Petrine Confes-sion as the Origin of Christology: A Structural and Theological Re- Examination of Mt. 16: 13-20,” written for Professor Vincent Piz-zuto. Congratulations, Joey, for this remarkable accomplishment. Acknowledgements and Gratitude With this edition, our gratitude extends to include a growing number of supporters. We are deeply grateful to Provost Jennifer Turpin, who has enthusiastically supported this project from its inception nine years ago. This anthology benefi ts from the collec-tive administrative support of Peter Novak, Vice Provost, Student Development; Marcelo Camperi, Interim Dean of the College of Arts and Sciences; and Lois Lorentzen, Associate Dean of Arts and Humanities, College of Arts and Sciences. This year we off er incalculable thanks to Digital Collections Li- WRITING FOR A REAL WORLD 8 brarian Zheng Lu at Gleeson Library, who oversaw the arduous task of digitizing and making available all previous issues of Writing for a Real World; this digital archive will be immensely helpful in making our annual publication easily accessible to all students at all times. The web address is listed on the last page of this journal. Many thanks go to the instructors of our authors for composing their introductions during their summer break. Brian Komei Dempster, David Holler, Devon C. Holmes, and Darrell g.h. Schramm all provided a much needed push toward publication. As the following page indicates, we dedicate this eighth issue of WRW to our valued retiring colleague, Associate Professor Darrell g.h. Schramm, who served in innumerable capacities during his twenty years at USF—not least of which was his devotion to his writing students. This publication also ends the tenure of Devon C. Holmes as our publication commitee chair, a position now chaired by David Holler. David and I give our deepest thanks to Devon for her years of leadership and continued commitment to our journal’s success. Our program assistant, Tara Donohoe, and our publication assistants, Estephanie Bautista Sunga and Laura Waldron, deserve special praise for helping WRW meet its many deadlines. Thanks, too, to Norma Washington and John Pinelli for managing the ledger, and, of course, a large debt, as well, is owed to Fredel Wiant, Chair of our newly formed Department of Rhetoric and Language, for her governance. Finally, our deepest gratitude is reserved for those students who submitted their work. As our Honorable Mention list illustrates on page ten, we received many more commendable papers than we were able to publish. Congratulations to those who earned honor-able mention, and, of course, congratulations to our winners, for all of our newest authors bravely enter the realm of published writers writing for a real world. —David Ryan, Editor WRITING FOR A REAL WORLD 9 This issue of Writing for a Real World is dedicated to Darrell g.h. Schramm, teacher, writer, poet 10 WRITING FOR A REAL WORLD Honorable Mentions HEATHER M. FOX “Injecting Meaningful Revisions into Oregon’s Non-medical Vaccination Exemption Policy” written for Public Ethics Brian Weiner, Politics BRENNA MCCALLICK “Casting Down the Gods from Their Pedestals: Burlesque in Nineteenth Century America” written for History of American Popular Culture Candice Harrison, History JOEY BELLEZA “On a Hierarchy of Ends in Ecumenical Dialogue: A Longerganian–Ratzingerian Analysis of Ecumenism” written for Introduction to Longergan Mark Miller, Theology and Religious Studies HANNAH HEYER “Satirically Verbose” written for Written Communication II Brian Dempster, Rhetoric and Language SOFIA ANDRADE “The Adverse Eff ects of the North American Free Trade Agreement in Mexico” written for U.S. Foreign Policy Stephen Zunes, Politics KELSEY O’BRIEN “Examining Time in Virginia Woolf and Friedrich Nietzsche” written for Existentialism Amy Timko, Philosophy WRITING FOR A REAL WORLD 11 NICOLE RILEY “In Need of Protection: A Look at Special Victims in the Democratic Republic of the Congo” written for Rhetoric and Politics David Holler, Rhetoric and Language ASHLEY RIESER “The Error in Assuming a Defi nite Character” written for Written & Oral Communication Devon Holmes, Rhetoric and Language ANDREA POWELL “The Uptown Tenderloin: Not Quite the Tourist Hotspot of Your Dreams” written for Written & Oral Communication Devon Holmes, Rhetoric and Language CHRISTOPHER J.S. WALDREF “Storing the Harvest: Solutions for Renewable Energy Storage” written for Written & Oral Communication David Holler, Rhetoric and Language ADAM DOUGLAS JACKSON ROSS “ ‘Put Some Sauce on It and We Call It Art’: A Dynamic Examination of the Usage of the ‘N’ Word Among Ethnicities” written for Written Communication II Tom Lugo, Rhetoric and Language DANIEL O’CONNELL “Welcome to the Tea Party” written for Advanced Writing Practicum Darrell g.h. Schramm, Saint Ignatius Institute THE PETRINE CONFESSION AS THE ORIGIN OF CHRISTOLOGY 12 WRITER’S COMMENTS The Petrine roots of the papal offi ce are a frequent topic of discussion among Christian theologians, Catholic and non-Catholic alike. In the modern context, debates surrounding the papacy are critical in devel-oping new refl ections on ecclesiology and the progress of ecumenism. This essay is but a simple contribution to the lively exchange of ideas which frequently surrounds this biblical passage. Returning to the Semitic roots of Matthew’s “rock narrative” (Mt. 16:13-20), I propose a new understanding of the person of Peter which, consonant with the traditional doctrines of the Catholic faith, attempts to more clearly de-fi ne the paramount signifi cance assigned to the “prince of the apostles” by the nascent Jewish-Christian community in the fi rst generation of the post-Apostolic era. By referring to the recurrence of strong Old Testament motifs in Matthew, we conclude that Peter necessarily held an undeniable primacy among the apostles, a primacy that also stood undisputed by the members of the fl edgling Christian religion. —Joey Belleza INSTRUCTOR’S COMMENTS Every graduating senior who is majoring in Theology and Religious Studies at USF is required to submit a capstone thesis paper. The course for which Joey Belleza wrote his paper was entitled, “Portraits of Christ: An Introduction to the Gospels.” This course introduces students to the historical-critical methods of biblical interpretation, which seek to examine the history of the Bible itself, and our ability to accurately interpret biblical texts in light of that history. With a focus on the four gospels, the course examines the way in which each evangelist—Mark, Matthew, Luke, and John—presented their christol-ogy in a manner that could best be understood and appropriated by their audience. Thus, the gospels present us with four different literary “portraits” of Christ, each of which vary depending on the perspec-tive of the evangelist, yet are also recognizable as portraits of the same “Jesus.” Joey’s capstone assignment was to choose one passage or “pericope” from among the four gospels and elucidate that passage by offering a careful exegesis of the text in light of the overall christology of the evangelist. In other words, Joey’s paper examines one “brush stroke” of the gospel writer’s “portrait” of Christ. —Rev. Vincent Pizzuto, Department of Theology and Religious Studies JOEY BELLEZA 13 JOEY BELLEZA The Petrine Confession as the Origin of Christology: A Structural and Theological Re-examination of Matthew 16:13–20 When Jesus went into the region of Caesarea Philippi he asked his disciples, “Who do people say that the Son of Man is?” They replied, “Some say John the Baptist, others Elijah, still others Jeremiah or one of the prophets.” He said to them, “But who do you say that I am?” Simon Peter said in reply, “You are the Messiah, the Son of the living God.” Jesus said to him in reply, “Blessed are you, Simon son of Jonah. For fl esh and blood has not revealed this to you, but my heavenly Father. And so I say to you, you are Peter, and upon this rock I will build my church, and the gates of the netherworld shall not prevail against it. I will give you the keys to the kingdom of heaven. Whatever you bind on earth shall be bound in heaven; and whatever you loose on earth shall be loosed in heaven.” Then he strictly ordered his disciples to tell no one that he was the Messiah.1 Ἐλθὼν δὲ ὁ Ἰησοῦς εἰς τὰ μέρη Καισαρείας τῆς Φιλίππου ἠρώτα τοὺς μαθητὰς αὐτοῦ λέγων, Τίνα λέγουσιν οἱ ἄνθρωποι εἶναι τὸν υἱὸν τοῦ ἀνθρώπου; οἱ δὲ εἶπαν, Οἱ μὲν Ἰωάννην τὸν βαπτιστήν, ἄλλοι δὲ Ἠλίαν, ἕτεροι δὲ Ἰερεμίαν ἢ ἕνα τῶν προφητῶν. λέγει αὐτοῖς, Ὑμεῖς δὲ τίνα με λέγετε εἶναι; ἀποκριθεὶς δὲ Σίμων Πέτρος εἶπεν, Σὺ εἶ ὁ Χριστὸς ὁ υἱὸς τοῦ θεοῦ τοῦ ζῶντος. ἀποκριθεὶς δὲ ὁ Ἰησοῦς εἶπεν αὐτῷ, Μακάριος εἶ, Σίμων Βαριωνᾶ, ὅτι σὰρξ καὶ αἷμα οὐκ ἀπεκάλυψέν σοι ἀλλ’ ὁ πατήρ μου ὁ ἐν ��οῖς οὐρανοῖς. κἀγὼ δέ σοι λέγω ὅτι σὺ εἶ Πέτρος, καὶ ἐπὶ ταύτῃ τῇ πέτρᾳ οἰκοδομήσω μου τὴν ἐκκλησίαν, καὶ πύλαι ἅδου οὐ κατισχύσουσιν αὐτῆς. δώσω σοι τὰς κλεῖδας τῆς βασιλείας τῶν οὐρανῶν, καὶ ὃ ἐὰν δήσῃς ἐπὶ τῆς γῆς ἔσται δεδεμένον ἐν τοῖς οὐρανοῖς, καὶ ὃ ἐὰν λύσῃς ἐπὶ τῆς γῆς ἔσται λελυμένον ἐν τοῖς οὐρανοῖς. τότε διεστείλατο τοῖς μαθηταῖς ἵνα μηδενὶ εἴπωσιν ὅτι αὐτός ἐστιν ὁ Χριστός. THE PETRINE CONFESSION AS THE ORIGIN OF CHRISTOLOGY 14 Introduction OF ALL THE APOLOGETIC WORKS written in defense of the insti-tutional papacy, almost all without exception make recourse to this pericope from the Gospel of Matthew. As such, it is oft-cited as a singular proof text justifying the existence of the papal ministry, the dogma of Roman primacy, and the concept of Petrine succession. That these words are boldly and prominently embla-zoned around the cupola of St. Peter’s Basilica in the Vatican lends signifi cant weight to such a broad interpretation of the text. Yet one should be wary of such a superfi cial and misguided approach, since the text in question does not concern the topics of Roman primacy, of succession, or even of papal ministry (in its developed modern form). The apologist must turn to other sources written during the sub-apostolic age, both biblical and patristic, to develop stronger support for these doctrines. The passage herein discussed, therefore, is by itself insuffi cient “proof” to justify the entirety of present ecclesiastical structures. What can be determined with measurable certainty from this pericope, however, is the fi rst and necessary step in constructing a theological-exegetical apologia pro primatio pontifi cis romani: by this “fi rst step” we mean the concept of Petrine (as opposed to Roman) primacy. The passage clearly indicates a special status held by Simon, son of John (or Jonah) among the followers of Jesus. By analyzing the text of the pericope itself, its proximate context within Mat-thew, and its remote context in light of other scriptural texts, we can develop novel understanding which, in terms consonant with the Matthean theological hermeneutic, further elucidates the nature of Peter’s unique signifi cance for the nascent Christian community. Jesus as Messiah of the Jews: A Primer of Matthean Theology Written after the Neronian persecutions and the destruction of the Temple in Jerusalem (circa 75–85 AD), this Greek gospel accord-ingly displays a doctrinal design diff erent from that of its canonical predecessor, Mark. Marcan infl uence is still prevalent, however, in JOEY BELLEZA 15 that much of the stories recounted in Matthew are taken from Mark. At times the parallel stories display remarkably high lexical and structural similarity, indicating that Matthew simply copied Mark’s account and used it for his own chronicles. In the instances where Matthean stories do not correspond exactly to its Marcan counterpart (such as the focus of our present investigation), we fi nd that the redactions as a whole, coupled with stories taken from the postulated proto-Matthew or “M” source, demonstrate Matthew’s theological priority. What is this Evangelist’s priority? Let us fi rst examine the Sitz im Leben of the contemporary period. The diaspora generated by the pacifi cation of Palestine by the Romans sent Jews out of Jeru-salem and into new metropolitan centers of the Empire. The per-secutions of Nero similarly produced like eff ects in the case of the Christians. In cities such as Antioch in Syria, followers of the Way frequently crossed paths with those holding fast to the rabbinic and Mosaic traditions, forcing the Christians (a term fi rst coined in An-tioch; cf. Acts 11:26 NAB) to develop a systematic defense of their beliefs against the inquiries of the Jews. Where seams in narrative sections are discerned, the inserted texts often take an apologetic character, going at length to rebut specifi c Jewish objections to the new faith in Jesus (cf. Mt 28:11-15). In locating the place where the First Gospel was written, Antioch therefore seems to be a prime candidate; for the purpose of our investigation, we shall retain this assumption. Why Antioch? There are several reasons. One of the major themes running throughout the Gospel of Matthew (and a cen-tral concern of our pericope) is the importance placed on Simon Peter. Although each canonical gospel recognizes that Simon son of John (or Jonah) was given the name “Peter” by Jesus, the “Rock dialogue,” which indicates a special authority given only to Peter, is a redactive text unique to Matthew. Antioch was home to a par-ticularly strong Petrine tradition, which names Evodius as Peter’s successor as head of the local church. The authentic letters of Ig-natius, who succeeded after Evodius’ death, further demonstrate substantial knowledge of the Gospel of Matthew. But perhaps the best evidence for choosing Antioch is specifi - THE PETRINE CONFESSION AS THE ORIGIN OF CHRISTOLOGY 16 cally the socio-religious situation therein. As a major metropolis with a substantial Jewish population (implied by Acts 11:19), the au-thor of Acts felt compelled to also mention that certain Christians there also “began to speak to the Greeks, proclaiming the Lord Jesus” (Acts 11:20), supporting the assumption that those who min-istered to the Gentiles were Jewish–Christians. With the preva-lence of Judaism fi rmly established in Antioch, we can discern Matthew’s intent to make clear to non-Palestinian Jews that the expected Messiah had fi nally arrived. This contrasts with Mark’s approach who, writing to an earlier audience with more chrono-logical proximity to the Paschal events, found no need to explain ad nauseam the Jewish character of Jesus’ messianic offi ce. In light of this richly nuanced Sitz im Leben, Matthew’s apparent fondness of explicit Old Testament citation and Moses–Christ par-allelism acquires defi nitive clarifi cation. That the apostles are com-manded not to preach outside Israel until after the Resurrection (cf. Mt 10:5-6, see also 15:24) highlights Matthew’s own concern for his primarily Jewish audience. The gospel’s fi ve book structure, the genealogy narrative, and the Sermon on the Mount, among other things, all point to the Matthean idea that Christ is a greater Moses, heir to the Davidic throne, establishing a new covenant in the Lord. For Matthew, Jesus’ story is prefi gured in the Law and prophets; he is the fulfi llment of the Law and the prophets and the concrete real-ization of God’s everlasting presence among men. That this theme unifi es the Gospel is eloquently demonstrated by Matthew’s famous inclusio. The birth narrative tells of a fulfi llment of Isaiah’s prophecy: “‘Behold, a virgin shall be with child and bear a son, and they shall name him Emmanuel,’ which means, ‘God is with us’” (1:23). The decisive arrival of the prophesized Messiah is solemnly proclaimed by the risen Christ himself; after commissioning the disciples to evangelize to the ends of the earth, the last words of this gospel are: “And behold, I am with you always, until the end of the age” (28:20). With the historical context of Matthew’s authorship having been established, let us discuss a major thematic element which will assist our understanding of Mt 16:13-20. Comprehension of the Jew-ish– Christian ontology of God (which runs throughout the gospel text) has direct implications for the exegetical analysis of our pericope. JOEY BELLEZA 17 The Shema and the Ontology of God in Matthew Matthew’s Jewish–Christian audience would have been doubtless-ly familiar with the shema, the supreme Jewish profession of faith (Dt 6:4): It is a declaration of utmost solemnity, of highest importance for the Jews and the synthesis of all their religious beliefs. It ex-presses the essential truth of Judaism, which is the oneness and uniqueness of God (the Hebrew word echad meaning “one,”also means “alone,” in the sense that the Lord alone is God). The struc-ture of the shema is of particular interest to us, since it constitutes a triple formula which we will see repeated in the Gospel of Mat-thew. There is a vocative appeal which calls the addressed person or people by name or title; other two phrases expound on the meaning of the fi rst clause. In the case of the shema, the fi rst clause is a call to Israel, an act of communication on the part of God. The call of God communicates the truth of monotheism to the People of Israel, as expounded in the second and third clauses. This is the essential ontological statement of divine identity which is of uni-versal signifi cance for Jews; now we shall see how Matthew adopts the triple structure of shema for his fi rst-century Jewish–Christian audience to explain the ontology of Christ, who is new self-com-munication of God to the world. A consistent feature in all the gospels, Jesus rarely speaks of his divine nature in clear terms outside of the circle of his apos-tles, hence the so-called “Messianic secret”; when in the presence of crowds or when pressed by his rabbinic and Roman adversaries, Jesus opts either to speak in parabolic language or to refuse to speak at all. Yet in the rare occasions within Matthew where the Divin-ity directly speaks of its own nature in unambiguous terms, we can glimpse traces of the triple ontological structure of the shema. One of the key ontological statements in Matthew is found shema Yisrael adonai [yhwh] elohenu adonai [yhwh] echad Hear, O Israel, The Lord our God: The Lord is One. THE PETRINE CONFESSION AS THE ORIGIN OF CHRISTOLOGY 18 in 4:17, after Jesus emerges from John’s baptismal waters. The voice of God, coming forth from the sky, says, “This is my be-loved Son, with whom I am well pleased.” In this case, the tri-ple structure appears unfi nished, and yet this “incompleteness” is understandable, since the baptism in the Jordan only signifi es the beginning of Jesus’ ministry. Still, the manifestation of the Trinity in the baptismal scene prefi gures the completion of the triple structure, which arises again towards the end of Jesus’ ministry in the transfi guration narrative (17:1-8). Here the voice of God speaks the same words (to Peter, John, and James bar Zebedee) as during the baptism, with a decisive addition of a third phrase: “This is my beloved Son, with whom I am well-pleased; listen to him.” This augmentation brings completion to the precise formulation of God’s nature. He exists not as a wholly aloof fi gure trapped in the Platonic world of forms; he is the transcendent initiator of a reciprocal communication be-tween the human and divine. He is the same one God of Israel, who calls his people by name and admonishes his people to listen, to hear—shema! Lagrange adds this commentary on the transfi guration which will foreshadow our deeper investigation into Peter’s confession: “peut-être il-faut regarder la voix à la trans-fi guration comme un confi rmation par le Pére, adressée aussi a Jacques et Jean, de ce qu’avait dit Pierre. Ou bien on pourrait, comme nous le proposions alors, placer la confession après la Transfi guration dans l’ordre du temps.”2 The baptism and transfi guration are therefore intimately linked as stages in the progressive revelation of God in the person of Christ; taken together, the two presuppose the confession of Peter between them as an intermediate but necessary step. Another central ontological statement exists in Matthew’s inclusio which we have already discussed. The end of the gos-pel includes Christ’s emphatic statement: “I am with you always (ἐγὼ μεθ’ ὑμῶν εἰμι πάσας τὰς ἡμέρας),” which defi nitively articulates the unity of Father and Son. Furthermore, we cannot take this verse out of the context of the Great Commission and the command to baptize in the name of the Lord, who is Father, Son, and Spirit (28:16-20). This commission therefore recalls the baptism of Christ, where the mystery of the Trinity was fi rst re- JOEY BELLEZA 19 vealed; in light of all that has been previously discussed, the entire Christian conception of God can be said to have its prefi guration in the shema, its transfi guration during the appearance of Moses and Elijah, and its completion in the commission to baptize. Within this cycle of shema—baptism—transfi guration—com-mission (which is the cycle of salvation history) lies our pericope. It will now be our task to show that the solemn declarations within 16:13-20 belong to this class of triple-structured ontological state-ments concerning the nature of God which have the ancient Jew-ish profession of faith as its archetype and origin. We can advance now to the direct analysis of 16:13-20. In this exploration it shall be paramount to recall Matthew’s intended audience and the ontol-ogy of God presented here. Exegesis: Verses 13-14 That Matthew puts this story in “the region of Caesarea Philip-pi” immediately indicates a Marcan origin, since the parallel story (Mk 8:27-30) also places the Petrine confession in the same loca-tion. The question posed by Jesus to his disciples is ontological in nature; given Matthew’s demonstrated interest in the ontology of God, we sense the extraordinary weight of the issue. This is not a question of Mosaic Law; rather, the inquiry points at the very heart of Jesus’ identity. To emphasize the magnitude of the inqui-ry, Pierre Bonnard writes that the verb ἠρώτα, here translated as “asked,” “peut revetir les deux signifi cations de demander (quelque chose a quelqu’un) et d’interroger; [Matthieu] ne le connaît le second sens.”3 What Jesus reveals in the following verses therefore must have an unusu-ally high signifi cance. The phrasing of the question reveals a Matthean redaction: whereas Mark’s Jesus asks, “Who do people say that I am,” our pericope asks, “Who do people say that the Son of Man is?” If we as-sume that Matthew copied from Mark, we can conclude that Mat-thew already equates Jesus (the “I am” of Mark) with the “Son of Man,” indicative of the mindset of Syrian Christians who already profess Jesus as Messiah of the Jews. Verse 14 gives the response of the apostles. Jesus’ question “was answered by all the apostles in unison, like a chorus.”4 The THE PETRINE CONFESSION AS THE ORIGIN OF CHRISTOLOGY 20 response comes from no single person, but is the product of con-sensus anonymously verbalized by a faceless they—“They replied...” The identity of those giving the reply is as ambiguous as the con-tent of the reply itself: “Some say John the Baptist, others Elijah, still others Jeremiah or one of the prophets” (16:14). The fact that the disciples are able to answer Jesus’ fi rst question in a collegial manner indicate that these (misguided) conceptions of the Son of Man were indeed common at the time and that the disciples knew these claims and perhaps believed them. We can even perceive a rapidity of response on the part of them, perhaps highlighting even more the presence of confusion within the circle of disciples con-cerning Jesus’ identity. As Peter is introduced, we see how Mat-thew creates a dichotomy between this uncertainty of the disciples and the confi dent audacity of Peter. Verse 15 Jesus asks a second question, moving away from the vagueness of what other people think of him and towards greater specifi city. Pressing deeper into the interrogation, the new inquiry is directed to his disciples. When Jesus asks, “Who do you [Ὑμεῖς, plural] say that I am,” we fi nd that the verb εἶναι is not preceded by pronoun ἐγώ: the inquiry deliberately lacks the emphatic “I am,” for saying so would be revelatory and would defeat the purpose of interro-gation. It is as if Jesus consciously refrains from giving any more clues as to his identity; by placing the burden of ontological inves-tigation on them, he expects a dramatic leap of faith away from the ambiguity of “what people say” and onto the fi rm certainty of orthodoxy, of right belief. It is precisely in this shift from the confusion of many voices to the certainty of one voice that Simon Peter enters the picture. Verses 16-18 We approach the core of our investigation. Peter confesses Jesus’ identity, but in a manner more comprehensive and complex than in the Marcan account. Whereas Mark simply puts the words “You are JOEY BELLEZA 21 the Messiah” in Peter’s mouth (Mk 8:29), Matthew presents the Pe-trine confession as a solemn, lengthy declaration. The redaction is a symptom of the pre-existing Petrine tradition in Antioch. Matthew is the fi rst canonical gospel defi nitively written after the apostle’s execution, and therefore his eminence was amplifi ed after receiving “the crown of martyrdom.” For Matthew, the confession here must prefi gure the confessio martyrorum he would ultimately endure in Rome, though as we see in Mt 16:21-23 (immediately following our pericope), Peter does not yet fully comprehend the implications of the confession. Commonly rendered in English Bibles (including our NAB) as “You are the Messiah, the Son of the living God,” these translations fail to convey the actual tripartite structure of the Greek text, and as occurs often, a loss in translation produces a loss in clarity. The verse is best transliterated in the following manner: Leiva–Merikakis renders this as “the Messiah, the Son of the God, the living one,”saying that “the four defi nite articles strung to-gether like this mean to convey the uniqueness and singularity of all the members [parts] of in sentence, quite in line with the radical em-phasis of the shema on the Oneness of God.”5 Note that the fi rst line of the confession, Σὺ εἶ ὁ Χριστὸς, retains the emphatic pronoun; Peter’s statement is therefore one of radical, cosmic importance. In response to Peter’s affi rmation of the Christ, Jesus says to this, apostle “Μακάριος εἶ,” which means “blessed/happy are you [singular]”—Jesus addresses Peter alone. In labeling him “blessed,” we can also sense the profound elation and happiness felt by Jesus upon hearing Peter’s solemn proclamation of faith. The confession of Peter generates a special blessing on his person; he is blessed because of his confession. “Flesh and blood” is a term with a particular meaning. In the Semitic worldview, blood is the essence and sign of life; it was Σὺ εἶ ὁ Χριστὸς ὁ υἱὸς τοῦ θεοῦ τοῦ ζῶντος You are the Christ the Son of God, [of] the Living one THE PETRINE CONFESSION AS THE ORIGIN OF CHRISTOLOGY 22 painted on doorposts to avert the angel of death, spilled on altars as an oblation to the divinity, and sprinkled on the masses as a sign of regeneration and renewal (Ex 12:7, 24:6-8; Lv 6:15). Flesh, the physical matter of bodies, is nothing but a product of dust (Gs 2:7; 3:19), and is meaningless without fl owing (living) blood. Human life is impossible unless fl esh and blood are fused together, as it were, into one being; “fl esh and blood” therefore signifi es the fullness of human existence. Indeed, it is all human life. As we saw in verses 13-15, Matthew introduces a dichotomy be-tween the uncertainty of a group and the certainty of one voice and by speaking with this certainty, Peter receives an extraordinary blessing. The truth which he professes is so great that even the fullness of all human ability and its multiplicity of voices—all fl esh and blood—cannot adequately perceive or communicate this truth on its own. Rather, Peter’s one voice conveys a truth made known through the revelation of the Father, the voice of the one God. This declaration of unshakable certainty compels Jesus to give unto Simon, son of Jonah, a new name: Peter, which means “rock.” Countless pages have been written, often by Protestant objectors to the papal offi ce, which asserts that the name bestowed upon Si-mon, Πέτρος, cannot be directly equated with “this rock” (πέτρᾳ) upon which Jesus builds his church, basing this claim on a subtle diff erence in meaning between the two words which existed in ancient Attic Greek but was lost in the emergence of the Koine [Biblical] dialect. In any case, the deliberate wordplay would make no sense unless Peter was indeed the Rock; furthermore, assuming that this conversation would have been conducted in Aramaic, the word kepha (Greek Κηφᾶς, transliterated as Kepha or Cephas) is the same in both cases (i.e., “You are kepha and upon this kepha...”). To solidify Peter’s identity as the Rock, one can look no further than the canonical Pauline literature, where Paul consistently calls Peter by the word “Κηφᾶς.” The rock metaphor recalls the parable of the wise man who built his house on rock (petra) and the fool who built his house on sand (Mt 7:24-26). When faced with the chaos of the fl ood waters, the house built on rock did shake, but did not collapse. Likewise, JOEY BELLEZA 23 the apostle has shown great wisdom through his confession, and Jesus decides to build his church on Peter. And when faced with the onslaught of infernal fury, there is no guarantee that this greater house will not shake. What is promised is this: through the powers of sin may shake the foundation, the gates of hell shall not pre-vail. Gianfranco Ravasi, referring to the many rock motifs in found in the Hebrew scriptures such in as Psalm 18, adds, “Quante volte nell’Antico Testamento Dio era cantato come la rupe incrollabile e sicura, la rocciaforte inattacabile, il picco roccioso invalicabile dalle forze del male,”6 affi rming the signifi cance of the name “Rock” as an Old Testament title exclusively granted to God. Ravasi continues, saying that “solo Cristo e Pietro ricevono questo appellativo,”7 in the New Testament, un-derscoring the weighty implication of Peter’s name. Matthew’s audience of Jewish–Christians, undoubtedly familiar with the stories of Abraham, Sarah, and Israel (Jacob), would have understood the signifi cance of being granted a new name. While the refusal of God to be named signifi ed that none shall have power over him (cf. Ex 3:14-15), the granting of a new name to human be-ings means precisely that God has power over him or her; likewise, Peter, like Abraham and Israel before him, must be servant to his name, and in doing so he participates in the ministry specially laid out for him by Christ. This is why Matthew’s Peter cannot be recognized simply as a mere spokesman or as primus inter pares; the blessing of Christ directed specifi cally to this apostle plus the conferral of a name indicates the granting of a special status, a real primacy among the apostles. Bonnard notes that in v. 18, “Pierre [...] répond, sans doute au nom des disciples mais non simplement comme leur porte-parole, car il sera félicité personnellement par le Christ matthéen.”8 The Petrine confession and the response of Jesus to that con-fession can be viewed as an unfolding of the truth proclaimed in the shema. The fi rst revelation of God to Moses established God as the supreme Being, the One who exists (yhwh), who communicates this truth to his people Israel, and who he calls by name. In Peter, we see a defi nitive response to that call of God. The God of Moses, once wholly transcendent and ineff able to the Jews, has shown his face in the person of Jesus, and in doing so, God can also be called THE PETRINE CONFESSION AS THE ORIGIN OF CHRISTOLOGY 24 by name, for he has taken on human nature. Peter recognizes this fact, and defi nitively calls God by name. Christ reciprocates, call-ing Peter by a new name, blessing him, and bestowing on him a new identity because of his faith. The triple structure of the shema is replicated three times in our pericope. Simon’s confession, which is itself an ontological statement, begins by calling upon the identity of the Christ, fol-lowed by two phrases which further explain his identity. In verse 17, it is Jesus who affi rms Simon’s faith, solemnly calling him by his legal name, followed by two phrases which explain the nature of his blessedness. Finally in verse 18, Christ gives Simon his new name, followed by a two-fold elucidation on the purpose of his name. Given Matthew’s overarching theological concern, (namely, that Jesus the Messiah and fulfi llment of Jewish scripture) it is hard to dismiss the almost liturgical and legalistic imitation of the shema’s rhetorical arrangement as merely incidental. On the contrary, we fi nd a deliberate pattern which indicates a close and progressive relationship between Jewish ontology, Christian ontology, and the Petrine primacy. Verses 17-18 hold two additional “keys” to our understanding of this pericope. The phrase “Blessed are you” belongs to the lan-guage of the beatitudes. The phrase “I say to you” belongs to the language of commandment and prophecy. Both formulas are used in contexts of solemn signifi cance and universal import; that they are also used in reference to Peter in these verses suggests that Peter himself has a function or an offi ce of universal import for Deuteronomy 6:4 Hear, O Israel, the Lord our God, The Lord is One. Matthew 16:16 You are the Christ, the Son of God, [of] the Living one. Matthew 16:17 Blessed are you, Simon son of Jonah, for fl esh and blood has not revealed this to you, but my Father in heaven. Matthew 16:18 I say to you, you are Peter, and upon this rock I will build my Church, and the gates of hell shall not prevail against it. JOEY BELLEZA 25 the church. What is the nature of the church that Jesus will build? Let us embark on a brief etiological exploration. In the masoretic text of the Bible, qahal is the Hebrew word used to describe a group that is called together, a popular assembly of sorts called for religious or juridical purposes. When the Hebrew text was transliterated into Greek, the editors of the Seputagint used the term ἐκκλησία, derived from the verb καλεο, “to call,”augmented with the prefi x εκ-, cognate with the Latin ex-, which roughly means “out of”; the Greek translation there-fore maintained much of the same meaning of the original Hebrew term, since they more or less described the similar institutions for each respective civilization.9 In ancient Athens, the ekklesia was a pop-ular assembly likewise called to vote on issues aff ecting the body poli-tic. That this word was adopted by the communities of the nascent Christian religion to describe their gatherings implies that the early Christians also considered themselves “called” out of the world unto Jesus—the Christians are responders to the call of the communica-tive God. Those who are called out therefore also have a rudimentary form of government which, like its linguistic precedents in the Jewish qahal and the Athenian ἐκκλησία, implies a governing structure with juridical authority. Christ, the rejected one turned cornerstone (cf. Ps 118:22-23; Mt 22:42), is the source of this authority granted to Peter, whom Christ constituted the rock of the church. Verse 19 Just as Christ in verse 18 says, “I will build my church” (οἰκοδομήσω; future tense), he likewise tells Peter “I will give you the keys to the kingdom of heaven” (δώσω σοι τὰς κλεῖδας τῆς βασιλείας τῶν οὐρανῶν). The granting of a pledge in this manner harks back to the covenental language of Genesis, where the enumeration of God’s many promises to Abraham are all told in future tense: No longer shall your name be Abram; your name shall be Abra-ham, for I am making you the father of a host of nations. I will render you exceedingly fertile; I will make nations of you; kings shall stem from you. I will maintain my covenant with you and your THE PETRINE CONFESSION AS THE ORIGIN OF CHRISTOLOGY 26 descendents after you throughout the ages as an everlasting pact, to be your God and the God of your descendents after you. I will give to you and your descendents after you the land in which you are now staying, the whole land of Canaan, as a permanent pos-session, and I will be their God. (Gn 17:4-8) One of the hallmarks of a biblical covenant is perpetuity. The promise that “the gates hell will not prevail against” the church al-ready alludes to its everlasting character; this concept is solidifi ed, petrifi ed (if one will permit) through the use of explicit covenantal language. The discussion of perpetual covenant must precede all questions concerning Petrine succession, but we shall not occupy ourselves with that subject here, for it is outside the scope of our investigation. The so-called “power of the keys” and the reference to binding and loosing evoke the memory of Eliakim, King of Judah, a man loyal to the Lord. The prophet, as the mouthpiece of God, foretells the downfall of the scribe Shebna, who has attached himself to worldly things, saying to Shebna (note the use of future tense, and the triple structure of the initial conferral of authority, which will be indicated below): (i) I will summon my servant Eliakim, son of Hilkiah; (ii) I will clothe him with your robe, and gird him with your sash, (iii) and give him over to your authority. He shall be a father to the inhabitants of Jerusalem and to the house of Judah. I will place the key of the house of David on his shoulder; when he opens, no one shall shut, when he shuts, no one shall open. I will fi x him like a peg in a sure spot, to be a place of honor for his family; on him shall hang all the glory of his family... (Is 24:20-24) Even here, the motif of “sturdiness” (later applied to Peter the rock) fi gures prominently. The authority of the deputy derives directly from the authority of the King; in this relationship lies the power of the offi ce. Keys, an ancient symbol of authority, are granted to both Eliakim and Peter; Eliakim exercises it in the royal House of David, while Peter exercises his authority on earth and JOEY BELLEZA 27 in the kingdom of heaven. The Greek word βασιλεία, just like the word ἐκκλησία, already carries connotations of juridical force, providing the biblical basis for a system of canon law. In each case, it is God who grants the authority to a special man as his ambas-sador or vice-regent, who acts by the authority and in the person of the divine King, who is God alone. Peter, therefore, can open and shut, bind and loose, confi dent in the promise that his judgments are ratifi ed in heaven. Though Jesus still speaks to Peter alone in this verse, the power to bind and loose are granted to all the apostles in Mt 18:18. It is important, however, to remember that the power of the keys is bestowed uniquely upon Peter. The power to bind and loose in Mt 18, based on the proximate context, applies specifi cally to the disciplinary power to exclude those who cannot reconcile them-selves with the church and who refuse to faithfully answer the call of the ekklesia—here the apostles receive the authority to impose excommunication and the authority to absolve. In 16:19 (in con-trast to the rest of the disciples), Peter alone receives the keys and the accompanying authority to bind and loose in a most universal sense, for the keys which Christ gives are the keys to the entire kingdom. Verse 20 The appearance of the “Messianic secret” after Peter’s confession is also found in the Marcan parallel; yet even in Mark, the con-fession at Caesarea Philippi is only in this episode where Jesus specifi cally prohibits his disciples from telling anybody that he is the Messiah. All other instances of “the secret” in Mark deal with people who have been healed but who do not confess Jesus’ divine nature. Jesus’ time to emphatically reveal his identity to the whole world had not yet arrived. Just as God spoke to Abraham in the future tense to indicate that Abraham’s promise to circumcise his household had not yet been fulfi lled; Jesus speaks likewise since he has not yet shed the requisite blood for the ratifi cation of the new covenant. THE PETRINE CONFESSION AS THE ORIGIN OF CHRISTOLOGY 28 Conclusion: Is Matthew’s Peter an Appropriate Model for the Church? As mentioned in the introduction, our pericope, while a funda-mental aspect of the modern Petrine doctrine, is nonetheless in-suffi cient in itself as justifi cation for the papacy as it exists today. One must refer to other passages in the Bible as well as to the writ-ings of the early Church Fathers in order to construct a compre-hensive case in defense of the papal offi ce. Accordingly, the results of exegetical study concerning the fi gure of Peter in the Gospel of Matthew are often split, largely among denominational lines. C.C. Caragounis, representing the Orthodox school of thought, retains the old Attic Greek distinction between petros and petra which no longer existed in New Testament times. Furthermore, he appeals to a hypothesized Aramaic basis of the Greek gospel (a claim which is indecisive), saying that the supposed underlying Aramaic word is not kepha but trna10 (the two words have diff erent connotations in Aramaic). This is obviously an assertion to reject outright if we consider the name “Cephas” an authentic Pauline reference to Peter. Protestants are often more fundamental in their critique of Matthew’s Peter. Garland notes that in the “fi fteen incidents in the Gospel that specifi cally involve [Peter] portray him as rash, con-fused, desirous of reward, overconfi dent, faltering, and cowardly— in other words, he represents a normal disciple.”11 The “rock” is not Peter, but his confession—the statement of faith is the foundation for the Church. Gundry, presupposing the petros–petra dichotomy, argues in the same manner, saying that Peter represents every dis-ciple who falters and then returns to faith.12 He is not a minister of extraordinary power, merely a literary archetype which represents every Christian who reads the gospel. All these assertions, in one way or another, ignore some fun-damental aspect of Matthew’s theological concern. The themes in Matthew (recall that he writes for a primarily Jewish–Christian au-dience) are Jewish to the core: JOEY BELLEZA 29 Matthew’s Jewish bend of mind is apparent even to the casual reader. He leaves unexplained many Jewish terms and customs such as handwashing, the nature of the two didrachma, the seat of Moses, phylacteries and fringes, and fl ight on the Sabbath, as-suming his reader had some notion of what is being talked about. He goes to some lengths to demonstrate the Jesus was the son of David, a title highlighted in Matthew, and that he has met all qualifi cations to be the messiah of Israel.13 Our pericope is likewise loaded with powerful Old Testament motifs, surely familiar to Matthew’s Jewish audience (shema, cov-enantal language, the granting of a new name, keys, binding and loosing), all of which contribute to the understanding that Peter has an authentic primacy not only of place but of authority. Ac-cording to Bonsirven, the “Semitic fl avor” (saveur sémitique) of Matthew’s language in 16:17-19 “est déjà un présomption en faveur de leur authenticité,”14 and accordingly we cannot simply gloss over the words without examining the powerful eff ect which it possesses over the Jewish–Christian consciousness. Directly following our pericope comes the fi rst prediction of the passion (16:21-23). As Peter rebukes Jesus, and in turn Jesus re-sponds: “Get behind me, Satan! You are an obstacle [σκάνδαλον, skandalon; literally, ‘stumbling block’] to me.” In the Greek text, “Satan” (Σατανᾶ) is transliterated directly from the Hebrew (ha- Satan; the tempter or accuser), which tells us that it is used by Mat-thew as a proper name. Jesus’ counter-rebuke therefore addresses not Peter, but the one who has temporarily taken hold of him. How can Peter be the sturdy rock of foundation for the church when here, immediately after the conferral of the keys, he is easily swayed by the Evil One? We need not look further than the depraved, nepotistic corrup-tion of the Borgia, Della Rovere, and Medici popes to see examples of the so-called petros become true skandalon, thinking and acting “not as God does, but as human beings do” (16:23). We can easily imagine a a frightened renaissance Pontiff on his deathbed, fear-ing the verdict of the Judge who will surely pronounce unto him: THE PETRINE CONFESSION AS THE ORIGIN OF CHRISTOLOGY 30 vade retro Satana, quia scandalum mihi es! Yet despite the decadent excesses of the historical papacy, not one of the men who held the offi ce, not even the supremely scandalous Alexander VI, taught any doctrine contrary to the basic Christian confession the Jesus is the Messiah. Not one dared to reverse the dogmatic defi nitions of their predecessors or those of the ecumenical councils. And in this sense, the church, like the house built on rock, was still shaken by the chaotic onslaught of sin, but was not toppled—sin did not prevail against it. Nau takes the Protestant argument further and suggests that, through convoluted semantic analysis and redaction criticism, Mat-thew’s Christ in 16:13-20 is actually employing “rhetorical dispraise” to describe Peter, a sort of ironic statement which actually condemns Peter for the fi fteen episodes of un-rock-like imperfection in Mat-thew mentioned by Garland. One of the central pieces to his argu-ment is the fact that in the resurrection narrative, whereas Mark’s angel (or messenger) says in Mk 16:7: “But go tell the disciples and Peter, [Jesus] is going before you to Galilee...’” Matthew 28:7 reads, “He has been raised from the dead and he is going before you to Galilee; there will you see him.” The mention of Peter is ominously removed (redacted) from Matthew’s post-resurrection account, and Nau takes this as particularly damning evidence that turns the “Petrine syndrome,” the widespread hermeneutical tendency to be-stow a primacy on Peter, on its head. As a result, the last explicit reference to Peter in Matthew is that of a sorrowful apostle weep-ing bitterly in the night, ashamed for having betrayed his Master (cf. 26:69–75). “Peter plays no individual part at all in the resurrec-tion or in the disciples’ response to the resurrection in Matthew’s portrayal,” being left instead to “fade away and become absorbed in the faceless company of ‘the eleven’”15 at the gospel’s end. For Nau, this is enough to dislodge Peter from his traditional place. All this, however, fl ies in the face of what we understand about the concept of perpetuity in covenantal theology. Silence concern-ing Peter in the ever-so-brief post-resurrection narrative does not necessarily imply Matthean condemnation; it merely indicates a shift in emphasis to Jesus without explicitly denying what was pre- JOEY BELLEZA 31 viously promised to Peter. Matthew’s concern in his resurrec-tion story is not to anathematize Peter. His intent here, as in the rest of his text, refl ects his overarching theological theme: Jesus of Nazareth is the Messiah of the Jews, the Christ, Son of the living God. And if we remember that Matthew makes Peter the primordial human mouthpiece for this fundamental Christological statement, it is increasingly diffi cult to subscribe to Nau’s theory of Matthean “ironic dispraise.” The primacy of authority must belong to Peter, for in Matthew’s gospel, it is through the decisive testimony of this disciple that the theo-logical ontology of God at last found its revolutionary consum-mation in Christology. Notes 1. New American Bible; this will be consistently used as our English text. Translations of other non-English sources are made by the author. 2. Marie–Joseph Lagrange, Evangile selon Saint Matthieu. (Paris: J. Gablada, 1948), 321. “The voice of the Transfi guration can be re-garded as a confi rmation by the Father, addressed to James and John, of that which Peter had said [the confession]. One could very well place, as we now propose, the confession before the Transfi guration in the order of events.” 3. Pierre Bonnard, L’Evangile selon Saint Matthieu. (Neuchatel: Delachâux et Niestle, 1963), 243. “The verb ἠρώτα can take on the two meaning of asking (something to somebody) and to in-terrogate; Matthew means the second meaning.” 4. Erasmo Leiva–Merikakis, Fire of Mercy, Heart of the Word: Medita-tion on the Gospel according to St. Matthew, vol 2. (San Francisco: Ignatius, 2003), 512. 5. Leiva–Merikakis, 515. 6. Gianfranco Ravasi, Secondo le Scritture: doppio commento alle letture della domenica, anno A. (Cassale Monferrato: Piemme, 1999), 240. “How many times in the Old Testament, God is invoked as the safe, unshakeable cliff , the unassailable stronghold, the rocky summit insurmountable to the forces of evil.” THE PETRINE CONFESSION AS THE ORIGIN OF CHRISTOLOGY 32 7. Ravasi, 240. “only Christ and Peter receive this title.” cf. Mt 21:42; Ps 118:22-23. 8. Bonnard, 244. “Peter responds without a doubt in the name of the disciples but not only as their spokesman, due to the fact that will be rewarded personally by the Matthean Christ.” 9. Joseph A. Ratzinger, Called to Communion: Understanding the Church Today trans. Adrian Walker. (San Francisco: Ignatius, 1996), 30. 10. Chrys C. Caragounis, Peter and the Rock trans. E. Gräßer. (Berlin: de Gruyter, 1990), 90-91. 11. David E. Garland, Reading Matthew: A literary and theological commen-tary on the fi rst Gospel. (New York: Crossroad, 1993),170-171 12. Robert H. Gundry, Matthew: A commentary on his literary and theological art. (Grand Rapids: William B. Eerdmans Publishing Company, 1982), 334. 13. Garland, 2. 14. Joseph Bonsirven. Théologie du Nouveau Testament. (Paris: Aubier, 1951), 88. “is already a presumption in favor of its authenticity.” 15. Arlo J. Nau, Peter in Matthew: Discipleship, diplomacy, and dispraise. (Col-legeville, MN: The Liturgical Press, 1990), 65-66. MADISON RUSSELL 33 WRITER’S COMMENTS In Professor Holler’s Written and Oral Communication II course, our class was assigned the challenge of constructing a Rogerian-based argument. If successful, the essay would strive to demonstrate the validity of different positions and aim to reach common ground on a particular issue. Considering the guidelines for the assignment as well as my interest in constitutional law, I chose to research the recent lawsuit, Christian Legal Society v. Martinez, from the time the complaint was initially fi led in 2004 to the fi nal oral arguments heard before the U.S. Supreme Court this spring (April 2010). After in-depth analysis and discussion of both sides of the case, I was able to understand the fascinating legal principles associated with it, and ultimately, make my own case. —Madison Russell INSTRUCTOR’S COMMENTS Madison demonstrates here, as she did throughout my yearlong Written and Oral Communication class, that she is in command of a complex argument. One additional challenge of this assignment, however, was that the suggested format of the essay was “Rogerian,” an approach based on the principles of Carl Rogers. This style of essay calls for the writer to be as restrained and respectful as possible when treating opposing arguments. The case Madison argues here (which was literally undecided when she wrote this essay) was extremely con-tentious, cutting to the heart of First Amendment protections. Madison artfully maintains her neutrality as she presents the powerful virtues of her opposition’s main points, yet she does not in any way compromise her principled stand. This essay, I believe, is merely Exhibit A in what I hope will be a long and disinguished law career for Madison Russell. —David Holler, Rhetoric and Language CHRISTIAN LEGAL SOCIETY V. MARTINEZ 34 MADISON RUSSELL The Right to Discriminate: An Analysis of Christian Legal Society v. Martinez Introduction A CASE THAT LIES IN THE INTERSECTION between diff erent constitu-tional values … [a] clash between autonomy, speech and associ-ation on one hand, and the very important constitutional values of equality on the other,” proclaimed Vikram Amar, Associate Dean for Academic Aff airs at University of California Davis School of Law and former law professor at University of California Hastings School of Law in San Francisco, as he described the recent dispute between a conservative Christian group and a public university (“College Social Groups and Discrimination”). In September 2004, the UC Hastings administration was informed that its Christian Legal Society chapter (commonly referred to as CLS) had begun to exclude gay, lesbian, bisexual and non-Christian law students from becoming members and offi cers. Leaders of CLS were requiring a signed commitment statement, known as the CLS Statement of Faith, which outlined promises to uphold “orthodox” evangelical Christian values (Bulwa par. 2). According to the statement, law students were ineligible, and therefore, immediately rejected if they “[advocated] or unrepentantly [engaged] in sexual conduct outside of marriage between a man and a woman” (Bulwa par. 4). After admitting to such exclusivity, CLS asked school offi cials that their group, along with all other religious student organizations, be exempted from the university’s fi rm non-discrimination policy (CLS). Like several other American law schools, UC Hastings had previously adopted an anti-discrimination policy to protect its stu-dents; documentation which prohibited discrimination on the ba- “ MADISON RUSSELL 35 sis of “race, color, religion, national origin, ancestry, disability, age, sex or sexual orientation” (Dorf par. 3). In response, UC Hastings denied CLS’s exemption request, and ceased to provide them with any additional public funding or support (Bulwa pars. 5-6). One month later, in October 2004, the Christian Legal Society sued UC Hastings School of Law (Bulwa par. 3). During the U.S. District Court trial in San Francisco, Judge Jef-frey White ruled in favor of Hastings (Bulwa par. 7). Similarly, the Ninth Circuit Court of Appeals (also in San Francisco) agreed, de-claring that the public school has the right to require its student organizations to “accept all comers as members” (Bulwa par. 7). On May 5, 2009, seeking a reversal of the Ninth Circuit Court’s deci-sion, CLS fi led a petition for writ of certiorari in the United States Supreme Court (CLS). On December 7, 2009, the Supreme Court agreed to hear Christian Legal Society v. Martinez, and will decide over the summer of 2010 whether UC Hastings can legally refuse to recognize, support and/or fund the Christian Legal Society stu-dent group on account of its discriminatory practices (“College Social Groups and Discrimination”). Overall, the case will have a dramatic impact on the future of public universities across the country, as well as their student-run organizations. It has stirred the long debate over not only gay rights and equalities, but ortho-dox religious groups who argue that their constitutional liberties are being violated when they are forced to tolerate views counter-ing their own (Bulwa par. 2). CLS’s Claims With student chapters at one hundred-sixty fi ve law schools in the United States, the Christian Legal Society is an accomplished or-ganization that integrates the study of law with spirituality and up-standing moral values. Prior to 2004, the CLS chapter at UC Hast-ings had been fully recognized for more than a decade, during which time, the group was open to all prospective law students. When CLS placed strict limitations on member admission, Hastings with-drew certain non-monetary support as well as approximately $250— CHRISTIAN LEGAL SOCIETY V. MARTINEZ 36 money specifi cally assigned to assist CLS offi cers with their travel expenses to the organization’s national conference (Bulwa par. 13). In its own defense, CLS claims it has exercised its constitutionally protected rights, such as freedom of speech, religion and associa-tion. Kim Colby, an attorney for the CLS, stated: “Religious groups have a right to require their offi cers to share their religious faith”; Colby’s opinion aims to explain the appropriateness and legality of the organization’s actions (Bulwa par. 10). CLS therefore argues that its First Amendment rights are being violated by UC Hastings, particularly the right of expressive association, and the right to be free from viewpoint discrimination (CLS). The First Amendment protects “the right of the people peace-ably to assemble, and to petition the government for a redress of grievances,” but the right of association becomes ambiguous and not specifi cally defi ned in the Constitution. The concept itself, however, is simple and sensible, as Cornell Law professor and FindLaw writer, Michael C. Dorf, explains: “Individuals seeking to express a view-point— and thus to exercise their First Amendment rights—will of-ten have diffi culty doing so eff ectively, unless they can band together with other like-minded individuals to generate and disseminate their message” (Dorf par. 7). In this particular case, CLS asserts that their right of expressive association is being violated when the organiza-tion is forced to accept members and offi cers who hold beliefs and/ or engage in behavior that opposes the group’s shared commitments; which in turn, hinders their message. To Gregory Baylor, senior legal counsel for the CLS, the right of a religious chapter to associate with those of their choosing is essential to the group’s wellbeing: I think that Hastings is violating the rights not just of religious student groups, not just of Christian Legal Society, but of all student organizations to share common beliefs together around those commitments, and to exercise their beliefs … I just don’t see the reason why Hastings needs to interfere with the ability of groups to gather around shared commitments, and why it’s sin-gling out Christian Legal Society for this policy. (“College Social Groups and Discrimination”) MADISON RUSSELL 37 In addition to expressive association, CLS contends that their right to be free from viewpoint discrimination is also being violated. (Though a more subtle, but equally substantial concept within the First Amendment, the right to be free from viewpoint discrimination is obstructed when a group is treated diff erently than another group on a social, monetary and/or legal basis because of its beliefs.) As a religious student organization, CLS feels that its right was infringed upon when Hastings denied its exemption request, and stopped public funding and support. CLS points to the fact that every other recognized student organization on campus is still receiving funds— even when some have admitted to exclusion themselves. In a recent KQED radio interview, Baylor also interjected: Hastings is really the outlier here—they’re doing something unique in discriminating against all student groups that want to foster their messages by selecting leaders and voters and mem-bers who share their commitments. (“College Social Groups and Discrimination”) No Legal Protection for Gays and Lesbians The legal briefs in the District, Ninth Circuit and now, Supreme Court, all agree that gays, lesbians and/or bisexuals are not legally protected from discrimination under state law or the U.S. Constitu-tion vis-à-vis Title IX, the Fourteenth Amendment, or any other federal legislation. If, for example, CLS were to also prohibit Afri-can- Americans, women, disabled students or senior citizens from joining, there would be no case here. The Supreme Court would reference the concept of insular minorities and fi nd that the Chris-tian Legal Society was being discriminatory on account of race, sex, disability or age; all having been deemed insular minorities or special groups protected under state and federal law. If a public university supported or fi nanced discrimination against those groups, it would not pass legal scrutiny. Yet, gays, lesbians and bisexuals are not clas-sifi ed as an insular minority (a term fi rst employed by Supreme Court Justice Harlan F. Stone in the 1938 case, United States v. Carolene Products Company to describe any entity facing prejudice; yet since CHRISTIAN LEGAL SOCIETY V. MARTINEZ 38 the 1960s, has been used by the Court to refer to “any group(s) that have been saddled with such disabilities, or subjected to such a history of purposeful unequal treatment, or relegated to such a position of political powerlessness as to command ex-traordinary protection from the majoritarian political process,” which commonly includes racial and ethnic minorities, but not sexually-oriented groups [Erler]). Both sides in the CLS case, therefore, argue over what legal rights, if any, gays, lesbians and bisexuals can and should be aff orded. Can they be discriminated against in the name of religious beliefs, or is sexual orientation now a characteristic worthy of legal protection? In many ways, the unclear legal status of homosexual and bisexual discrimina-tion is what makes this case so diffi cult. Religious Freedom v. Basic Equality: A Diffi cult Choice Christian Legal Society v. Martinez is an interesting case with no clear right or wrong answer—only two potential outcomes that now must be decided by nine individuals acting as one group collectively. The Supreme Court could possibly rule in favor of the Christian Legal Society, taking the stance that CLS was within its constitutional rights to exclude certain “non-protect-ed” students from membership. As a result, UC Hastings would be required to reinstate the group, and continue public support and funding for CLS in the future. Additionally, the Court would establish a new legal principle to allow religious student organi-zations in public universities to be exclusive when confronted with diff erentiating views, lifestyles (and thus, people) that ne-gate their message or threaten their very existence. However, on the other hand, if the Supreme Court affi rms the District Court as well as the Ninth Circuit Court’s position, it will rule in favor of UC Hastings, and require CLS to be open to all students, regardless of sexual orientation; that is, if CLS desires university support and recognition. Such a decision would have signifi cant impacts not only on public universities across the country, but their student-run organizations, and the rights off ered to gay, lesbian and bisexual students. Yet, from both a legal and moral standpoint, Christian Legal MADISON RUSSELL 39 Society v. Martinez raises an array of diffi cult questions: Does UC Hastings, or any public university for that matter, have the legal right (or obligation) to cease public funding and support on ac-count of discrimination? Does it matter that the discrimination was practiced in connection with religious exercise and associa-tion? Is the law school being discriminatory against the CLS be-cause they themselves were being discriminatory? Alternatively, is CLS within their own First Amendment rights to affi liate with only those of their choosing? Does the First Amendment pro-vide them with the justifi cation to be discriminatory on account of expressive association and other clauses? If so, can they expect the public to fi nance and support their cause? At the same time, in 21st century American society, what constitutes “discrimina-tion” and on what grounds can someone be discriminatory or discriminated against? Is society’s defi nition any diff erent than the law’s defi nition? If so, is it imperative that we begin to inte-grate society’s views into the law? These complex questions have all been posed by lawyers, students, and activists across the country. On April 19, 2010, the Supreme Court heard the oral arguments from the attorneys representing Christian Legal Society as well as those defending UC Hastings. The Justices will reach a decision on the case by the end of summer 2010. Equality Should Prevail If the gay, lesbian and bisexual community will ever receive the legal recognition, protection and equality it deserves, particu-larly in an educational setting, it will be based on the outcome of a fi nal ruling in a case like this one. In his 2000 book, God’s Name in Vain: The Wrongs and Rights of Religion in Politics, Stephen L. Carter, William Nelson Cromwell Professor of Law at Yale Law School with a special focus on constitutional law, writes ex-tensively on the First Amendment as well as the relationship be-tween religion and law; the separation between church and state. In the following passage, Carter clarifi es his view of American society today, and the government’s connection with morality: CHRISTIAN LEGAL SOCIETY V. MARTINEZ 40 In modern, religiously pluralistic America, where, as we have seen, the religions play vital roles as independent sources of meaning for their adherents, this means that the government should nei-ther force people into sectarian religious observances, such as classroom prayer in public schools, nor favor some religions over others, as by erecting a crèche paid for with public funds, nor punish people for their religiosity without a very strong reason other than prejudice. (Carter 103) In response, one could be compelled to pose additional inqui-ries, such as: What or rather, who exactly, defi nes the “very strong reason other than prejudice”? Is prejudice no longer a legitimate rea-son? Does that equate to the infringement on other people’s rights, specifi cally basic human rights and decencies? Again, who decides when the government can and should become involved in this type of punishment; and who or what precisely is that entity—the Su-preme Court? Elected offi cials? The people? When the government provides political, legal and/or monetary support of one specifi c religion in any fashion vis-à-vis for example, educational endowments, service grants, formal recognition, or in this case, exemptions in favor of that religion, it may be more detrimental in the long-run to our society than for the government to support no religion at all. Once one group is supported over another, court cases will be initiated on a recurring basis; all participants requesting the same equal treatment: each wanting to discriminate equally. In other words, if the Supreme Court or any branch of government sanctions one religious group’s discrimination because it is allegedly necessary to preserve their message, that is favoritism, which, in and of itself, is hypocritical and anti-democratic. Therefore, the traditional sepa-ration of church and state is not only a logical foundation for the United States, but vital in maintaining the democracy and values of equality upon which this country was founded. Although one may empathize with the Christian Legal Society’s argument, and strongly believe that the ability to practice religion freely and without con-sequence or cohesion is fundamentally important, CLS publicly dis-criminated against a certain group for their ideas, lifestyle choices, and perhaps innate characteristics. Furthermore, they wanted public funds and support to do so. In essence, they demanded that society provide a vehicle for their religious beliefs and help foster discrimi- MADISON RUSSELL 41 nation and prejudice. That prejudice, as noted in Professor Carter’s argument, is a “strong [enough] reason“ for the Supreme Court to rule in favor of UC Hastings. Secularism, equality, and the prohibi-tion of ideological prejudice holds a deeper merit, and should prevail in this timeless case between religion and law. Author’s Postscript Following the oral arguments on April 19, 2010, the Supreme Court was faced with a diffi cult question, as proclaimed by Justice Ginsburg: “May a public law school condition its offi cial recogni-tion of a student group—and the attendant use of school funds and facilities—on the organization’s agreement to open eligibil-ity for membership and leadership to all students?” (Ginsburg 1). In a close 5–4 vote, the Justices affi rmed the District and Ninth Circuit Court of Appeal’s decision, and on June 28, 2010, ruled in favor of UC Hastings. Justice Ginsburg wrote the Opinion of the Court, which was joined by Justices Kennedy, Stevens, Breyer and Sotomayor. Ginsburg’s opinion established the fact that Hast-ings’ non-discrimination policy was reasonable and viewpoint-neutral for CLS as well as any other student assembled organiza-tion. Hastings had not impermissibly denied CLS public funds or formal recognition—in fact, the law school was correct and legally bound to reject CLS’s exemption request from the non-discrimination policy. Though in agreement with Ginsburg’s viewpoint, Justices Ken-nedy and Stevens wrote their own concurring opinions. While Kennedy discussed rights of expressive association and established himself as clearly the “swing” vote in the case, Stevens issued a well-written, logical argument on allocating public resources. In the fol-lowing passage, he articulates his position—the First Amendment allowed and will continue to allow CLS to be exclusionary, but not at the expense of the State: Other groups may exclude or mistreat Jews, blacks, and women−or those who do not share their contempt for Jews, blacks, and women. A free society must tolerate such groups. It need not CHRISTIAN LEGAL SOCIETY V. MARTINEZ 42 subsidize them, give them its offi cial imprimatur, or grant them equal access to law school facilities. (Stevens 6) In a vigorous dissenting opinion, Justice Alito, Chief Justice Roberts, and Justices Scalia and Thomas maintained a much diff er-ent perspective—CLS’s rights of free speech, religion and expressive association were blatantly violated, and will remain unprotected if Hastings is permitted to insist that student organizations accept “all comers” as members, even those opposed to the group‘s fundamental beliefs and message. Justice Alito considers the interesting possibil-ity that “political correctness in our country’s institutions of higher learning,” such as the social rights and sensitivities being extended to gays and lesbians in the twenty-fi rst century, may be more detri-mental to the principles of free expression (for the sake of religions), than the alternative (Alito 1). His opening statement and subsequent opinion present a powerful and refl ective outlook; one which poses serious questions about the constitutional rights of groups and reli-gious organizations to be exclusive in a democratic and egalitarian-based society: “The proudest boast of our free speech jurisprudence is that we protect the freedom to express the thought that we hate the most” (Alito 1). The Supreme Court’s 5–4 decision in Christian Legal Society v. Martinez resolves CLS’s instant dispute with UC Hastings. However, it is doubtful that we have seen the end of constitutional challeng-es over the balance between enforcing non-discrimination policies in public forums on one hand, and allowing religious and political free expression on the other—even if doing so, entails further dis-crimination and exclusion. “Exclusion, after all,” Justice Ginsburg acknowledged, “has two sides” (Ginsburg 28). Works Cited Aden, Steven H. Letter to Judy Chapman. 23 September 2004. 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BRENNA MCCALLICK 45 WRITER’S COMMENTS For our fi nal paper in Professor Fels’s Civil War and Reconstruction class, we either chose to write a historiographical essay comparing arguments of Civil War historians, or a primary source-based paper, making an argument using original historical material. Professor Fels gave us the freedom to explore any topic, so long as it related to the causes, course, or aftermath of the Civil War. After reading the speeches and papers of Abraham Lincoln, Frederick Douglass, and James Henry Hammond—each with fervent beliefs about slavery—I wanted to look at the Constitution to determine if arguments for the legality of slavery held true. Analyzing the Constitution quickly evolved into analyzing the Constitutional Convention of 1787, specifi cally the recorded discourse between state delegates. I chose to narrow the focus of my paper by looking only at anti-slavery arguments regarding the constitutionality of slavery, then addressing each argument with direct quotations from the men who crafted the Constitution. —Brenna McCallick INSTRUCTOR’S COMMENTS Deep confl icts among people, like the one that led to the American Civil War, are fought out in the realm of ideas before they proceed to the battlefi eld. Brenna McCallick has written a fi rst-rate research paper that examines the ways in which the Constitution was used to support or attack the institution of slavery in the years prior to the Civil War. Most interestingly, she chooses to focus on the abolitionist side of the argument, where controversy was actually at its highest (white Southerners took for granted that the Constitution accepted the legality of slavery). Skillfully analyzing the record of the debates by the Constitutional framers, Brenna shows that extreme abolitionists like William Lloyd Garrison were wrong to regard the Constitution purely and simply as a pro-slavery document (Garrison’s “Covenant with death”), while more moderate abolitionists like Frederick Douglass and Lysander Spooner were equally mistaken to believe that the Constitution contained a tacit condemnation of slavery etched between its lines. Along the way, Brenna’s research sheds light on the startling fact that Americans as a whole were more hostile to slavery in the 1780s than they would become in the 1830s, 40s and 50s. —Anthony Fels, Department of History CONFLICT AND COMPROMISE: THE CONSTITUTIONALITY OF SLAVERY 46 BRENNA MCCALLICK Confl ict and Compromise: The Constitutionality of Slavery THE CIVIL WAR ERA has come to represent a time of great na-tional division. Overshadowed by the division between North and South, the divisions within confl icting ideological systems add more complexity to understanding this era. Antebellum abolition-ists were united in their hostility to slavery. They were divided, however, by their contradictory interpretations of slavery in the Constitution. Three of the most prominent fi gures of the aboli-tionist movement—William Lloyd Garrison, Frederick Douglass, and Lysander Spooner—fell on diff erent sides of this debate. The radical Garrison believed that the Constitution sanctioned slavery and supported abandoning the Union. In contrast, Douglass and Spooner saw the founding documents as inherently antithetical to slavery. By examining some of the records of this discourse and debate from the Constitutional Convention of 1787, it is possible to shed light on the founders’ intentions regarding slavery in the nation. Indeed, the question of their intentions is a critical part of interpreting the document itself. Despite Douglass’s and Spooner’s vehement denial, the Constitution did accommodate slavery in the United States. However, a careful examination of the records from the Constitutional Convention reveals that the founders predicted this practice would die out. Ultimately in their respective analyses of the Constitution, Garrison was too negative, Douglass too posi-tive, and Spooner too literal. Some of the strongest voices arguing the pro-slavery nature of the founding documents belonged to abolitionists. These fi gures, believing there to be no room for democracy in a nation whose creed so blatantly bars millions of people from freedom, sought to BRENNA MCCALLICK 47 abandon the Union. One such fi gure was Garrison, a radical aboli-tionist from Massachusetts. He outlined his case against the Con-stitution thus: The Constitution is not a statute, but a UNION, a COMPACT formed between separate and independent colonies, with con-fl icting interests and diverse sentiments, to be reconciled in the best manner possible, by concession and compromise… What those concessions and compromises were, all knew when the compact was framed and adopted; they related to the pros-ecution of the foreign slave trade for twenty years, to the al-lowance of a slave representation in Congress, to the hunting of fugitive slaves, and to the suppression of domestic insurrec-tions, for the special benefi t of the slave States; and to direct taxation and the navigation laws in behalf of the free States.1 In the latter part of this important passage, Garrison lists his four main grievances with the Constitution. This list represents the most commonly cited Constitutional provisions regarding the question of slavery. Garrison acknowledges that the document was created as a compromise to hold together a precarious bond between the states. He subsequently implies that concerns about the freedom and welfare of slaves were easily overlooked for the sake of politics. As far as his emphasis on compromise goes, Garrison is cor-rect. The founders did make compromises between states in the interest of establishing a Union. James Madison, the “Father of the Constitution,” believed that the existence of many diff ering interests would ultimately ensure that one interest would not gain a tyrannical power over the others. In other words, the necessity of compromise ensured political stability. Whatever the founders’ feelings on the issue of emancipation, eliminating slavery through the Constitution was out of the question. Benjamin Franklin, Pres-ident of the Pennsylvania Abolition Society, even rejected his own organization’s petition to abolish slavery within the Constitution, conceding that “the memorial, in the beginning of the delibera- 1. Garrison, William L. “The United States Constitution.” Selections From the Writings and Speeches. (New York: Negro Universities Press, 1968), 303. CONFLICT AND COMPROMISE: THE CONSTITUTIONALITY OF SLAVERY 48 tions of the [Constitutional] convention, might alarm some of the Southern states, and thereby defeat the wishes of the enemies of the African trade.”2 The idea of compromise—and of inevitable concessions—was at the heart of constructing the American Con-stitution. Like so many other issues, the issue of slavery would have to be handled with a compromise. As evidenced by the records from the Convention, the issue of slavery in the United States presented a signifi cant source of dis-cord among the state delegates. In the end, representatives tried to reconcile their diff erences in the interest of creating a stronger, more stable government. The Convention delegates disagreed on the issue of slavery and yet realized the need for a give-and-take relationship between the states. For example, one delegate from Connecticut, Roger Sherman, was cited in the records of the Con-vention as disapproving “of the slave trade; yet as the States were now possessed of the right to import slaves, as the public good did not require it to be taken from them, and as it was expedient to have as few objections as possible to the proposed scheme of Gov-ernment, he thought it best to leave the matter as we fi nd it.” 3 Even anti-slavery advocates like Sherman had to admit that the urgency of creating a stable Union necessitated (at least temporarily) mak-ing allowances for slavery. Garrison understood the nature of the Constitution as a docu-ment created through compromise but argued vehemently that it was an ironclad agreement actually ensuring and protecting the practice of slavery. Passages from his writings on the Constitution such as, “[the American people] have designedly ‘framed mischief by a law,’ and consigned to chains and infamy an inoff ensive and helpless race,” reveal Garrison’s decidedly disapproving view not only of the founders but of the nation as a whole. “The people of this country,” he writes, “have bound themselves by an oath to have no other God before them than a CONSTITUTIONAL GOD, which their own hands have made.”4 Garrison notably groups the founders in with the current population of the United States, imply- 2. “The Constitutional Convention and Slavery.” A Necessary Evil? Slavery and the Debate Over the Constitution. Ed. John P. Kaminski. (Madison: Madison House, 1995), 42. 3. Kamisnki, “The Constitutional Convention and Slavery,” 59. 4. Garrison, “The Constitution of the United States,” 304. BRENNA MCCALLICK 49 ing the shared guilt between lawmakers and adherents. “Let us con-fess the sin of our fathers, and our own sin as a people,” he declares, “in conspiring for the degradation and enslavement of the colored race among us.”5 Garrison thus argued that the founders created the Constitution with the intent of enslaving the black race. A further examination of the records from the Constitutional Convention challenges Garrison’s claims of plans for systematic enslavement among the “fathers” of the nation. Many delegates with confl icting interests shared a consensus view of the immoral-ity of slavery. Abraham Baldwin of Georgia theorized that, “If left to herself, [the state of Georgia] may probably put a stop to the evil.”6 George Mason, a delegate from Virginia and a slaveholder, conceded that slaves “produce the most pernicious eff ect on man-ners. Every master of slaves is born a petty tyrant.” He concluded, “The General Government should have power to prevent the in-crease of slavery.”7 Hugh Williamson, a delegate from North Caro-lina, demonstrated the emphasis on compromise when he stated, “both in opinion and practice he was, against slavery; but thought it more in favor of humanity, from the view of all circumstances, to let in South Carolina and Georgia on those terms [referring to Article 1 Section 9, or the importation of slaves], than to exclude them from the Union.”8 Garrison was, thus, too brash in his as-sertion that the writers of the Constitution “conspir[ed] for the degradation and enslavement of the colored race.” Many of the delegates who came together to write the Constitution were in fact opposed to slavery. Any Constitutional allowances for it re-fl ected more the priority of establishing a Union than any ill will toward the slaves. In stark contrast to Garrison’s disdain for the Constitution, other fi erce anti-slavery fi gures praised the document as a guar-antee of liberty for all. Such advocates argued that the practice of slavery was simply unlawful. Frederick Douglass, who saw the pos-sibility of change without disunion, viewed the Constitution fa-vorably. Contrary to Garrison’s views, Douglass argued in a speech 5. Garrison, “The United States Constitution,” 307. 6. Kaminski, “The Constitutional Convention and Slavery,” 60. 7. Ibid., 59. 8. Ibid., 63. CONFLICT AND COMPROMISE: THE CONSTITUTIONALITY OF SLAVERY 50 given after the Supreme Court’s Dred Scott decision, “The Con-stitution… and the sentiments of the founders of the Republic, give us a platform broad enough, and strong enough, to support the most comprehensive plans for the freedom and elevation of all the people of this country, without regard to color, class, or clime.���9 In a later speech, Douglass more confi dently asserted, “[the Founders] framed the Constitution plainly with a view to the speedy downfall of slavery.”10 Based on this optimistic view of the potential for national growth and the intention of the found-ers to accommodate slavery’s downfall, Douglass argued that the place for abolitionists was solidly within the Union, fi ghting for the slaves. Douglass’s statements here refl ect an almost excessive opti-mism, but he correctly acknowledges the room for national change within the Constitution. Turning again to the words spoken at the convention in 1787, one fi nds evidence that emancipation— far from being unthinkable, as Garrison believed—was actually a topic of discussion. Roger Sherman, in fact, “observed that the abolition of Slavery seemed to be going on in the U.S. and . . . the good sense of the several States would probably by degrees com-plete it.” Echoing this view, another delegate from Connecticut, Oliver Ellsworth, stated, “Slavery in time will not be a speck in our Country.”11 Charles Pinckney of South Carolina, a proponent of slavery, expressed his view that “If the Southern States were let alone they will probably of themselves stop [slave] importations.”12 Each of these three opinions reveals an underlying belief in the in-evitable end of the abuses of slavery. Douglass, therefore, was not too far reaching in his claims about the potential for change under the Constitution. Many delegates themselves expressed their be-liefs in imminent changes. Regardless of his accuracy in assuming the delegates’ hopes for an end to slavery, Douglass was slightly too hopeful with other claims. He focused on the actual language of the Constitution— 9. Douglass, Frederick. “The Dred Scott Decision” 1857. The Frederick Douglass Papers. Ed. John W. Blassingame. (New Haven: Yale University Press, 1979-1992), 172-3. 10. Douglass, Frederick. “The Present and Future of the Colored Race in America” 1863. The Frederick Douglass Papers. 578. 11. Kaminski, “The Constitutional Convention and Slavery,” 60. 12. Ibid. BRENNA MCCALLICK 51 both what was declared, and what was not declared—in his rebuttal of the “Garrisonian” view. He stated, “Neither in the preamble nor in the body of the Constitution is there a single mention of the term slave or slave holder, slave master or slave state . . . Neither is there anything in the Constitution standing alone, which would imply the existence of slavery in this country.”13 Further empha-sizing his adamant belief in the intentional omission of the word “slavery,” Douglass proclaimed, “When I admit that slavery is con-stitutional, I must see slavery recognized in the Constitution. I must see that it is there plainly stated that one man of a certain description has a right of property in the body and soul of another man of a certain description.”14 Arguing nobly for an anti-slavery interpretation of the Constitution, Douglass separated the guilt of the nation from the intent of the founders. He declared that men like Garrison made their claims in “light of a SECRET and UN-WRITTEN understanding of its framers, which understanding is declared to be in favor of slavery . . . They do not point us to the Constitution itself . . . but they delight in supposed intentions—in-tentions no where expressed in the Constitution.”15 Distinguishing between the practice of slavery versus the legality of it, the mind-set of the present nation versus that of the founders, Douglass dis-misses Garrison’s pessimism and directs his focus to the guarantee of liberty within the Constitution itself. While Douglass here quickly glosses over the intent of the creators of the Constitution, this particular exemption reveals an excessively idealistic trust in the founders’ good intentions. Un-derstanding the Constitution as it is, not as one wishes it to be, requires an examination of the interests that led to its creation (which Douglass, ironically, embraces as clearly anti-slavery in his 1863 speech). Because Douglass focused so narrowly on the ex-act wording of the Constitution, the decisions surrounding word choice are worthy of investigation. Article 1 Section 9 presented a wording challenge to the delegates of the 1787 Convention. This clause declares: 13. Douglass, “The Dred Scott Decision,” 176. 14. Ibid., 175 15. Ibid., 177 CONFLICT AND COMPROMISE: THE CONSTITUTIONALITY OF SLAVERY 52 The Migration or Importation of such Persons as any of the States now existing shall think proper to admit, shall not be pro-hibited by the Congress prior to the Year one thousand eight hundred and eight, but a Tax or duty may be imposed on such Importation, not exceeding ten dollars for each Person.16 Returning once more to the Convention records, Gouverneur Morris of Pennsylvania allegedly proposed “making the clause read at once, ‘the importation of slaves into North Carolina, South Car-olina and Georgia shall not be prohibited etc.’ This he said would be most fair and would avoid the ambiguity by which, under the power with regard to naturalization, the liberty reserved to the States might be defeated.” However, he added, “if the change of language . . . should be objected to by the members from those States, he should not urge it.” Morris, thus, proposed phrasing that included the term “slaves.” Interestingly, in response, representa-tive Mason “was not against using the term ‘slaves’ but against naming North Carolina, South Carolina and Georgia, lest it should give off ence to the people of those States.”17 Mason’s concern over the approval of the white citizens, rather than the implications of including the word “slaves,” demonstrates again the casual man-ner in which many delegates debated an addition that might have decisively silenced arguments of the unconstitutionality of slavery. Douglass’s claims do hold value in that, in the end, no form of the word “slave” can be found within the Constitution, yet he failed to realize just how close the word came to being a part of the nation’s founding document. Also, by not acknowledging the use of euphe-misms in place of the word, he expressed an unrealistic optimism in the deliberate omission of slavery. To reinforce his belief in the goodness of the document, Douglass pairs his argument about Constitutional wording with a broader argument regarding the diff erence between the life and the form of the law. “Law is in its nature opposed to wrong,” he asserted, “and must everywhere be presumed to be in favor of the right.”18 Sharing this belief in a “natural” law was a man whom Douglass references in his Dred Scott Decision speech—the radical 16. Kaminski, “The Constitutional Convention and Slavery,” 55. 17. Ibid., 63. 18. Douglass, “The Dred Scott Decision,” 176. BRENNA MCCALLICK 53 abolitionist and legal expert Lysander Spooner. In The Unconstitu-tionality of Slavery, Spooner takes many of the same liberties with interpretation that Douglass takes. He proclaims, “If we look into the law of nature for the meaning of the word ‘free,’ we fi nd that by that law all mankind are free.”19 This passage not only reveals his and Douglass’s shared belief in natural law but also their mutual fi xation on the wording of the Constitution. Indeed, much of Spooner’s overall argument consists of refuta-tions of what he believes to be blatantly erroneous interpretations of the law. He breaks down the language of each supposed pro-slavery provision of the Constitution in order to show how their meanings have been distorted. However, like Douglass, Spooner’s narrow focus on detail results in rather far-fetched claims. For in-stance, he addresses Article 1, Section 2, or the “three-fi fths clause,” which states: Representatives and direct taxes shall be apportioned among the several States, which may be included within this Union, ac-cording to their respective numbers, which shall be determined by adding to the whole number of free persons, including those bound to service for a term of years, and excluding Indians not taxed, three fi fths [3/5] of all other persons.20 Regarding this controversial clause, Spooner explains, “The slave argument assumes, gratuitously, that the word ‘free’ is used as the correlative of slavery, and thence it infers that the words ‘all other persons,’ mean slaves.” He argues alternatively, “It is obvious that the word ‘free’ aff ords no argument for slavery, unless a meaning correlative with slavery be arbitrarily given to it, for the very pur-pose of making the constitution sanction or recognize slavery.” Fi-nally, he adds conclusively, “slavery then had no legal existence. The word must obviously be presumed to be used as the correlative of something that did legally exist, rather than of something that did not legally exist. If it were used as the correlative of something that did not legally exist, the words ‘all other persons’ would have no 19. Spooner, Lysander. “The Three-Fifths Clause.” The Unconstitutionality of Slavery. 3rd Ed. (Boston: Bela Marsh, 1860), 79. 20. Ibid., 73. CONFLICT AND COMPROMISE: THE CONSTITUTIONALITY OF SLAVERY 54 legal application.”21 Even more forcefully than Douglass, Spooner fi xated on the true meaning of the wording of the clause. Despite his careful reasoning, Spooner completely overlooks the actual historical reality of the writing of the Constitution. His fi xation on wording removes the document from its historical con-text— from the labors of a congregation of men—and lifts it, ironi-cally, to an impenetrable abstract plane. To discern the true meaning of any document, one must examine authorial intention. Spooner, unfortunately, undermines his own argument by ignoring the actual intentions of the men who so deliberately chose those words. Spooner insists that “free” does not indirectly express “enslaved,” yet the discourse throughout the debate over the adoption of the clause proves otherwise. In plain language, the delegates discussed the 3/5 law as referring to “slaves,” sometimes even calling them “blacks.” In one instance, Elbridge Gerry of Massachusetts report-edly “thought property not the rule of representation.” He asked rather brusquely, “Why then should the blacks, who were property in the South, be in the rule of representation more than the Cattle and horses of the North. [sic]”22 James Madison, the Father of the Constitution himself, was quoted in the records as proposing, “[I] nstead of proportioning the votes of the States in both branches [of Congress], to their respective numbers of inhabitants computing the slaves in the ratio of 5 to 3, they should be represented in one branch according to the number of free inhabitants only.”23 In these instances, as in many more, the delegates expressed in cold, clear language what the euphemistic phrase “all other persons” refers to: black slaves. While Spooner marshals other arguments worthy of consideration, his essential reliance on overlooking or else denying the existence and legitimacy of slavery in the minds of the founders signifi cantly undermines his overall claim. The Constitution is, at its most essential level, a compro-mise— a balancing act that demonstrates the lengths to which early Americans went to ensure the precarious equilibrium between state and central government. The delegates at the Constitutional Convention did not seek to create a Utopia; they sought a func-tional democracy. The very words of the preamble “form a more 21. Spooner, “The Three-Fifths Clause,” 73-4. 22. Kaminski, “The Constitutional Convention and Slavery,” 46. 23. Kaminski, “The Constitutional Convention and Slavery,” 47. BRENNA MCCALLICK 55 perfect Union” reveal their belief that the nation could not and would not remain static in its laws and institutions. These words indicate both the belief that government was inherently imper-fect and that the Union would never be truly perfect. Slavery was accounted for in the Constitution not because the founders want-ed it to exist in the nation for all time, but because it had to be accepted in the interest of establishing a Union. Douglass is cor-rect in noting the signifi cance of the omission of “slavery.” The founders realized the gravity of including the word, and we can faithfully interpret its omission as their underlying disdain for the institution. Nevertheless, the Constitution still does include slav-ery, however vaguely and euphemistically. Ultimately, the framers instituted laws regarding slavery because they accepted its real-ity. They left what most believed to be the inevitable process of emancipation up to posterity. Works Cited “The Constitutional Convention and Slavery.” A Necessary Evil? Slavery and the Debate Over the Constitution. Ed. John P. Kaminski. Madison: Madison House, 1995. Douglass, Frederick. “The Dred Scott Decision” 1857. The Frederick Douglass Papers. Ed. John W. Blassingame. New Haven: Yale University Press, 1979-1992. ________. “The Present and Future of the Colored Race in America” 1863. The Frederick Douglass Papers. Ed. John W. Blassingame. New Haven: Yale University Press, 1979-1992. Garrison, William L. “The United States Constitution.” Selections From the Writings and Speeches . New York: Negro Universities Press, 1968. Spooner, Lysander. “The Three-Fifths Clause.” The Unconstitutionality of Slavery. 3rd Ed. Boston: Bela Marsh, 1860. THE STORY OF CORMAC MAC AIRT 56 WRITER’S COMMENTS Nearly everyone studying European history has heard of Robin Hood, Bloody Mary, or some other once-historical-fi gure-gone-legendary, and yet few researchers take the time to focus on the reasons why these persons have become so embroiled in myth and folklore. Instead, the accounts of their lives are reduced to footnoted examples of “bad history.” Professor Olds’s Myths and Forgeries in European History Senior Seminar focused on just such a subject, prompting us to ask not only what the truths behind these fi gures were, but also why such mythology had sprung up. “What is History but a Fable Agreed Upon? The Story of Cormac mac Airt” focuses on a 3rd century Irish king who, though no doubt a powerful and infl uential king while alive, has been aggrandized to a super-human warrior and king, much like England’s King Arthur. This paper explores patriotic Irish literature of the past millennium, as well as external cultural, military, and technological forces that shaped Cormac mac Airt’s change from human king to a sort of supernaturally blessed Irish King Arthur. —Kelsey Ransick INSTRUCTOR’S COMMENTS Beginning with Herodotus, the Greek historian whose detractors called him “the Father of Lies,” and continuing into the modern period, differentiating between history and fi ction has been diffi cult. While the History Channel and other popular outlets would have us believe that the role of the historian is simply to unveil the naked truth about what ‘really’ happened, students in my seminar learn that the contrast is not always so clear. While reading many of the foundational writings of European history, we discover that even purportedly objective historical narratives must be read critically. In particular, we focus on historical accounts of origins, ranging from the origins of humanity itself in biblical accounts, the origins of various European peoples as imagined by medieval historians, and of the origins of modern nation-states, as crafted by their current inhabitants. In her exemplary essay, in which she synthesizes her extensive and careful independent research, Kelsey nimbly dissects the various strands of history and legend in the narratives of Cormac mac Airt. In fl awless prose, Kelsey expertly navigates the complex relationship between the past and its representations, while also illuminating the ambiguities that muddy the waters between truth and fi ction, and between a historian and her sources. —Katrina Olds, Department of History KELSEY RANSICK 57 KELSEY RANSICK The Story of Cormac mac Airt “What is history but a fable agreed upon?” —Napoleon IRELAND has an abundance of mystical tales, many of which, for the everyday reader, have come to take the place of verifi able history for the periods that lack written manuscripts. Though this is not a calamity, some measures must be taken to explain how and why the history and myths of Ireland are so intertwined that it is al-most too diffi cult to separate them. One fi gure that illustrates well the complexities of Irish myth and history is that of Cormac mac Airt, a high-king of Tara in the 3rd century. The present-day stories about the semi-legendary fi gure of Cormac refl ect more of their infl uences than their origins. While substantial enough to prove his existence and his lasting infl uence on Irish culture, these stories do not provide enough consensus for a modern scholar to be satisfi ed of the details of his reign. The modern concept of Cormac mac Airt is formed by his place in history as well as in literature, though the former’s accuracy has been somewhat lost to a lack of primary sources and further overpowered by England’s growing control over the rest of the British Isles, and the latter has had many adaptations made in the struggle to align the Irish story with the literary tradi-tions of the countries that Ireland came into contact with. Cormac, the son of Art and grandson of Conn of the Hundred Battles, is generally “considered greatest [of all Irish kings] by the poets, the seanachies, and the chroniclers.”1 A seanchaí was similar to a bard, an “offi cial genealogist and historian [who today is known as a] teller of tales and singer of songs.”2 It is in these genealogies and songs that Cormac fi rst appears, and for many centuries, it was only thanks to the virtue of these seanachies that what is known of 1. Seumas MacManus, The Story of the Irish Race: A Popular History of Ireland (New York: The Devin-Adair Company, 1946), 45. 2. Francis John Byrne, Irish Kings and High-Kings (New York: St. Martin’s Press, 1973), 14. THE STORY OF CORMAC MAC AIRT 58 the high-king survived. Their accounts are not necessarily primary sources, but are the closest the modern reader can get to them. Ac-cording to seanachaí tradition, Cormac’s father died in battle the night after he was conceived, and, after he was born, some stories say he was reared by a wolf, much like the she-wolf in the stories of Romulus and Remus.3 Others say that a foster father named Luigne Fer Trí raised him.4 Still others say that he was brought up in the court of the King of Ulster.5 There are two main stories about how he became king. The fi rst assumes that he was raised at the King of Ulster’s court. After he is expelled from court for varying reasons, he forms a plan to take revenge upon the king. He makes an alli-ance with the warrior Tadg and promises him “as much land as he could compass in his chariot the evening after the battle in which he should be victorious.” 6 The two defeat the king and Cormac takes his throne. The other version claims that as a child, Cormac was a shepherd for a widow in the lands of Lugaid Mac Conn, who was the usurper of the throne that rightfully belonged to Cormac. One of the widow’s sheep escapes and eats from the queen’s garden, and Lugaid pronounces that the sheep must be killed. As that would deprive the widow of her source of income, Cormac denounces Lu-gaid’s judgment as unjust, pointing out that the profi ts of the sheep’s wool ought to pay back the price of the vegetables, as both the wool and the vegetables will grow again. The people realize that Cormac’s fi nding is “a true judgment . . . and he who makes it must surely be the son of a king.”7 Lugaid fl ees and Cormac becomes king. After these rather fantastical stories of Cormac’s youth, we fi nd much more substantial evidence about Cormac’s reign. We know more of his accomplishments as an adult because, as a king, he was better known, and he left written records through which we can trace his actions. Many things were expected of a high king of Ireland, and Cormac accomplished much for his people. He was 3. Ibid., 66. 4. Anne Connon, “A Prosopography of the Early Queens of Tara,” The Kingship and Landscape of Tara, ed. Edel Bhreathnach (Dublin: Four Courts Press, 2005), 234. 5. Alfred Webb, A Compendium of Irish Biography (Dublin: M. H. Gill & Son, 1878), 96. 6. Ibid., 96. 7. Helen Landreth, Dear Dark Head: An Intimate Story of Ireland (London: Wittlesey House, 1936), 52. KELSEY RANSICK 59 especially concerned with the laws of Ireland, codifying the laws that “remained basic Irish law until the seventeenth century.”8 He established the Fort of Kings at Tara as the seat of the high kings9 of Ireland to help enforce his law codes, and he founded universi-ties for war, history, and jurisprudence.10 The Fianna, “a great stand-ing army of picked and specially trained, daring warriors, whose duty was to carry out the mandates of the high king,”11 reached the height of their power and success under Cormac and Finn mac Cumaill, who was married to the high-king’s daughter.12 After or-ganizing much of Ireland under his high-kingship, Cormac turned his attention to expansion. He “obtained…the sovereignty of Alba,” which is modern-day Scotland.13 He brought in new technologies, such as the watermill he brought in for his Pictish mistress and quern-maid, Ciarnat.14 By the end of his reign, Cormac had au-thored three books. One was the Doomsday Book-like Psalter of Tara; another was the Book of Aicill, a book on criminal law; and the last was The Counsels of Cormac or Instructions of a King, a book of ad-vice for his son and other rulers.15 When Cormac fi nally retired in the mid-3rd century (either because his son came of age or because he lost and eye and he had to act “in compliance with a law which required that the king should have no personal blemish”),16 it was said that “thus end[ed] one of the most fruitful as well as illustrious reigns that ever blessed the island.”17 Though it is diffi cult to pin down the exact year of his death, most place it around 266 A.D. Because of his request to not be buried in the traditional pagan graveyard of the kings of Tara, many believe that Cormac was one of the fi rst three Christians in Ireland before the coming of St. Patrick.18 Additionally, many legends say that the druid Mailgenn, 8. Max Caulfi eld, The Irish Mystique (Englewood Cliff s: Prentice-Hall, 1973) 107. 9. MacManus, The Story of the Irish Race, 47. 10. Martin Haverty, History of Ireland (San Francisco: Occidental Publishing Co., 1881). 41. 11. MacManus, The Story of the Irish Race, 65. 12. Connon, The Kingship and Landscape of Tara, 247. 13. MacManus, The Story of the Irish Race, 48. 14. Donnchadh Ó Corráin, “Ireland c.800: Aspects of Society,” in A New History of Ireland, ed. Dáibhí Ó Crónín (Oxford: Oxford University Press, 2005), 564. 15. MacManus, The Story of the Irish Race, 50-51. 16. Haverty, History of Ireland, 42. 17. MacManus, The Story of the Irish Race:, 50. 18. R. A. S. Macalister, Ancient Ireland: A Study in the Lessons of Archaeology and History (London: THE STORY OF CORMAC MAC AIRT 60 angered by Cormac’s conversion, cursed the king to choke to death on a salmon bone.19 The two ways to best evaluate these legends are to look at Cor-mac mac Airt as two diff erent yet related persons. It is tempting to believe that “with ‘deifi cation’, such characters [as Cormac] are removed from the historical scene,”20 but one must understand Cormac as both an historical and a literary fi gure, for he has sig-nifi cance in both traditions. As far as the former Cormac, most of our gleanings come from archaeological evidence, foreign writings on contemporary Ireland, and a few primary sources. The three books that Cormac is supposed to have written are some of the only sources we have from his time, though parts of them were clearly edited and adapted by later authors. Thus, most research on Cormac relies heavily upon secondary sources. For the most part, the sources agree on Cormac’s historical importance. They address how later vestiges of his infl uence provide reasonable evidence that he was a real person. Remnants of his standing army, the Fianna, continued for a few centuries after his death and made a resurgence in the 19th century as Ireland made its fi nal and somewhat success-ful push towards independence. The Fenians were an important symbol for the Irish Republican Brotherhood, and their American counterpart, the Fenian Brotherhood, stood for a politically and socially independent Ireland.21 As later Irish sources boast and as the Venerable Bede confi rms, Cormac gained control over Alba/ Scotland and parts of Wales.22 Two of the three books that are attributed to Cormac survive to this day in various forms. The Psalter of Tara, whose existence is known through its references in other works, is now lost. Some believe the Psalter of Tara to be a record of land ownership and divi-sion, while others believe it to be records of genealogies, battles, and antiquities. As no copies remain, its subject is unclear. The Ber-la Laws, also known as the Book of Aicill, were a fundamental part of Methuen & Co., 1935), 161. 19. Helen Landreth, Dear Dark Head: An Intimate Story of Ireland (London: Wittlesey House, 1936), 61. 20. James Carney, “Language and Literature to 1169,” in A New History of Ireland, ed. Dáibhí Ó Crónín (Oxford: Oxford University Press, 2005), 480. 21. Landreth, “The Ragged Coat,” in Dear Dark Head, 259-296. 22. Caulfi eld, The Irish Mystique, 107. KELSEY RANSICK 61 Irish law until the time of Elizabeth I. Their basic framework remains, but there is little doubt that these were edited and adapted by later rulers. Cormac wrote the original fourteen articles of the laws to guide his son, Coirpri, who succeeded him, and law schools soon picked up on his text, producing additional commentary and laws.23 An unknown lawyer in the 8th century compiled the fi nal form of the Berla Laws that is available today.24 Though expanded by later lawmakers, the laws Cormac put together “governed the people of Ireland till Elizabeth [Tudor’s] English laws supplanted them.”25 If noth-ing else, this feat alone should settle Cormac in the history books as one of the most infl uential inhabitants of Ireland. Interestingly, some of the laws Cormac wrote “defi ne[d] the rights and duties of foreign trading vessels.”26 That he found it necessary to draw up these rights and duties indicates extensive trading relations with other countries. In fact, he is believed to have had “a diverse group of clients from among the Gauls, Romans, Franks, Frisians, Lombards, Caledonians, Saxons, and Cruthin.”27 The Instructions of a King is the most well known of his works, and we have many translations of it today. It is one of the only primary sources on Cormac available to mod-ern scholars. Because of its detailed dialogue on good qualities for kings, the authority of kings and chieftains, agriculture and animal husbandry, warnings, health, and justice, we get a pretty good idea of the general opinion on these subjects during Cor-mac’s time, and therefore many aspects of everyday life—both the ideal and the imperfect—are explained. Unfortunately, we do not have many documents from Ire-land during Cormac’s reign, which means we must rely on ar-chaeology for more information on 3rd century Ireland. Archae-ological evidence presents the following picture of 3rd century Ireland: 23. M. J. Macauliff e, Gaelic Law: The Berla Laws; Or, The Ancient Irish Common Laws (Dub-lin: Hodges, Figgis, and Co., 1925), 7. 24. Ibid. 25. Landreth, Dear Dark Head, 56. 26. MacManus, The Story of the Irish Race, 85. 27. Thomas Cleary, trans., The Counsels of Cormac (New York: Doubleday, 2004), viii-ix. THE STORY OF CORMAC MAC AIRT 62 With favorable climatic conditions, from c.200 onwards … the pollen evidence indicates increasing woodland clearance and a major expansion in both pastoral farming and tillage. This suggests a rising population. This is likely to have been the result of a better diet indicative of farming improve-ments, probably coming from Roman Britain, which may have included the introduction of dairying, new types of do-mestic animal, new crop strains, and new technology.28 This trend helps explain why Cormac was regarded as such an excellent king, as “the Irish idea of kingship [was defi ned by] good trade, good weather, good omens, [and] such abundance of goodwill that nobody slew another.”29 The increase in food production and rising population that became apparent dur-ing Cormac’s reign meant he was credited with creating such prosperity. One can see the remnants of the new religion and technology spreading from the Roman Empire that Cormac brought to Ireland that made its appearance during or soon af-ter his time. It is also clear that he erected many buildings at Tara, including the banqueting hall, a sun-house for the queen, the Kings’ Seat, and the House of Cormac.30 The remains at Tara are still visited by millions of tourists each year. The Annals of Ulster used Cormac’s death was for dating other events, such as the Battle of Ochae. By the 5th century, Niall Noígiallach, another high-king, was claiming Cormac as his ancestor in an attempt to legitimize his reign, though the implication that the kingship was “direct succession from father to son…is quite out of keeping with the Irish laws of dynastic succession and betrays the prehistoric regnal list as merely a converted pedigree.”31 Because of the uncertainty surrounding the primary sourc-es, “for the age in which they were written, the legends of Cor-mac mac Airt are important primary documents,”32 indicating that literature surrounding Cormac reveals much about the 28. Nancy Edwards, “The Archaeology of Early Medieval Ireland,” in A New History of Ireland, ed. Dáibhí Ó Crónín (Oxford: Oxford University Press, 2005), 296. 29. Carney, A New History of Ireland, 484. 30. R. A. S. Macalister, “The Site of Tara,” in Tara: A Pagan Sanctuary of Ancient Ireland (London: Charles Scribner’s Sons, 1931), 1-81. 31. Byrne, Irish Kings and High-Kings, 73. 32. Tomás Ó Cathasaigh, The Heroic Biography of Cormac mac Airt (Dublin: Dublin Insti-tute for Advanced Studies, 1977), 26. KELSEY RANSICK 63 diff erent times when the legend was written down by the manner in which it was written. A thorough reading of the legends will show that the literary fi gure of Cormac served to “exemplify ide-al kingship than portray [the] actual king.”33 His stories are valu-able because they refl ect the “deep-lying concepts of ancient Irish kingship.”34 The fi rst mark of this theme is Cormac’s fi r fl athemon— his judgment on the widow’s sheep who ate the queen’s vegetables. The fi r fl athemon, meaning “‘the prince’s truth’, is central to the Irish ideology of kingship.”35 It was through the king’s demonstra-tions of righteousness and justice that “come prosperity and fertil-ity for man, beast and crops; the seasons are temperate, the corn grows strong and heavy…cattle give milk in plenty, [and] rivers and estuaries teem with fi sh.”36 This pervading prosperity in turn indi-cates the theme so prevalent in “Irish literature of kingship: the king is the centre of the cosmos.”37 Because we are still able to per-ceive such a markedly Irish concept in his legend, the sources that discuss his fi r fl atheman and other marks of the ideal Irish king are distinct from later literary tracts that show the infl uence of other cultures the Irish encountered after Cormac’s time. Though this theme pervades the literature of Ireland across many centuries, the historical reality of kingship in 3rd century Ireland was perhaps much less extravagant. There were two “lev-els” of king in ancient Ireland: the local king and the high king. The high king was one of dozens of loca
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